Jun 16, 2023
To:Yuneir
"Arrive" is used in English these days!!
You are right to avoid "came / come" because those words have another meaning in English that is sexual, if people are thinking that way! 🤣
In English the common saying would be "We have arrived" (as an announcement) or "I arrived at the location" (as a sentence.) "I arrived" or "we arrived" by itself is not considered a complete sentence or statement.
The only other word I didn't know in your writing was "reverence."
In English, "reverence" is used as a religious term, and it usually means "to be awed by God or greater powers." So I don't think that is what you mean here 😂
It is a really big challenge to write a story in another language! I think it is amazing 🤩 I wish you the best of luck and hope you have fun!!
