Jun 12, 2023
There's a genuineness and gentleness to your writing that I just love! It's like your signature voice as an author, and it's definitely coming through. Maybe it's a sense of maturity? I can't put it in words, but there's a soothing feeling to the writing.
So far Eli and Ama definitely feel like family to me! Eli's fallen into the role of protective big brother, but he also wants Ama to learn to stand up for herself (which is still so very brother hehe.) I'm interested to see if this will shift to romance as they grow, or if it will stay something more like familial love. Living apart might change things!