Jun 16, 2023
Enjoying more of the world building and also character progression! I feel like they're finally getting comfortable with each other, just a bit. Though Princess is very lucky that Layn was tired 😴
Okay! I have questions, but I think they're ones you can easily pop into the narrative to clear up any confusion! 😆
(1) I'm a bit confused as to how "ethereal" Layn is. He's not quite alive, and doesnt need food, drink, or sleep (though it'll take him a bit to adapt to this.) He's also spiritually bound to a sword. So I assumed that the "human looking" part of Layn was almost like a spirit, and somewhat ethereal, perhaps capable of "disappearing" into his vessel (aka becoming the sword.) But that was some assumption on my part. Is he actually much more physically present than that? Since you mention needing to bathe and change clothes, that makes him way more...solid? 🤔
(2) Princess booked two rooms, so my first thought is to borrow the blankets and sheets (maybe even the mattress) from the second room and make a makeshift bed on the floor! 🤣 Okay I know they're sharing a bed for romantic development. But it might make more sense to not have the second room at all, since it does technically provide another bed that they could rearrange.
