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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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May 01, 2026

Hmm, was that knight Stark? No, he showed up when Claude got there. Cornelius?

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Chapter:14

May 01, 2026

I know this was written long before it, but this mine scene is giving me Sentenced to Be a Hero vibes.

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Chapter:13

May 01, 2026

I could see an exorcist squad busting in, or at the least, showing up after everyone else does all the hard work.

Soul Nemesis [VOLUME II]

Chapter:31

May 01, 2026

Caught an error. You added a "didn't" where there shouldn't be one when describing the floorboards blowing up. Other than my gripe with the *s, everything looks good.

Soul Nemesis [VOLUME II]

Chapter:30

May 01, 2026

To:kazesenken

Thanks for the rec.

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Chapter:12

May 01, 2026

To:kazesenken

I've heard of the series and the barrel meme, but never that. How good are the games?

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Chapter:12

May 01, 2026

To:WALKER

I take it back. Just saw Cornelius had official art, so now my image of him matches with that one.

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Chapter:11

May 01, 2026

The last line completely ruins the vibe, in a good literary way. I actually kind of like how disjointed the message is as it gives off a sense of urgency as maybe Naomi couldn't type it properly in a hurry, and just wanted to get the message out.

Soul Nemesis [VOLUME II]

Chapter:29

May 01, 2026

To:Katsuhito

Was just about to say, "This feels like the endgame."

Soul Nemesis [VOLUME II]

Chapter:29

May 01, 2026

Natural bald spotted.

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Chapter:12

May 01, 2026

Wow, he broke the ice.

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Chapter:11

May 01, 2026

To:WALKER

Thanks to this comment, I now can't unsee Cornelius as male Elsa.

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Chapter:11

May 01, 2026

Like how dark this got. My only gripes are the use of the *s. They felt out of place here especially since I don't really see a reason for them. Other than that, think you had a slight error in the line, "and while the captors were dragged towards long, fierce sentences". Think it should be "their captors" as it makes the next line about the saviors make more sense.

Soul Nemesis [VOLUME II]

Chapter:28

May 01, 2026

To:Taylor J

Still waiting for those commercial hoverboards 10 years later.

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Chapter:10

May 01, 2026

Hey, paying for dinner's better than her shaving your head, Claude. Unless Claude's into that sort of thing...

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Chapter:10

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