Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Oct 31, 2024

    Author's Commentary #143:

    Time to talk about Chapter 143: Mimoko vs Maestro Wiley Frisch.
    The final game of Season 4 is here, and it's a showdown between Mimoko and Maestro Frisch. Originally, I actually planned for Wiley to become president, which is why his rating is 3050, in order to reference the fact that he'd be the leader of all 50 US states. However, as I finalized my ideas for the arc, I decided it would be better for him not to.

    Wiley was never intended to be a good person. Morally grey at best. However, when I finalized on what his relationship with Sheila would be, I felt he at the least didn't deserve to be rewarded. While it is tragic that his family was killed in a political protest turned violent, it doesn't excuse how he treated Sheila.

    Speaking of Sheila, she's now free to do what she wants with her life thanks to the wager Wiley made with Mimoko. She's also got friends like Katie and Sandy who will stick by her side and even push back against the party if they begin to turn on her. However, Clifford being the asshole that he is would turn on her without question if the party deemed her a traitor, which is why he deserved both those kicks he received.

    Finally, the next chapter will be the last chapter of season 4. Season 5 won't begin immediately, but instead, I'll be listing my top 10 favorite and least favorite games and characters in the series. You won't want to miss it.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Oct 31, 2024

    Author's Commentary #138:

    Time to talk about Chapter 138: Killer king swap.
    There is quite a lot to talk about, so first up, behind the scenes stuff. This chapter was actually one of the first chapters written for Season 4. Much like Season 3, I started by writing the final fight and working my way back. That likely explains why the pacing felt a bit off at times in the original draft, though I do feel me rushing at times was more due to burnout if anything. This is why I decided to rectify things with a revision as now the story flows much better.

    Second, let's talk about the game. Believe it or not, I ended up completely rewriting the game. The original still featured a Bongcloud, king and queen swap, and ended on the 69th move with Pewler left with just his king. However, I then learned that it was possible to checkmate with the king. On Chess.com, there is an achievement known as "killer king" which you get for delivering a checkmate with the king. Believe it or not, this is possible, but only via a discovered checkmate. When I learned about it, I knew I had to rewrite the game to include it. It took a while, but it paid off. And speaking of killer kings, the title of the chapter is a reference to the Chess.com achievement of the same name.

    And finally, Pewler is dead. I guess you could say he bit the dust. The key to Iori's victory was Pewler underestimating just how sadistic she really was. In fact, this was the first time Pewler truly lost his composure. But since Pewler's dead, that means it's time to reveal the sin he embodied.

    This was actually tough as I went back and forth between pride and greed. Ultimately, I went with pride/hubris as his sin. This is mainly because he's overconfident and thinks he has control of everything. He also has some similarities to Masayoshi Shido from Person 5, who, you guessed it, embodies the sin of pride. While he also displayed some tendencies worthy of making him embody the sin of greed, I feel pride fits him better due to his massive hubris, though feel free to argue otherwise if you think greed fits him better.

    Now that everyone's back safely, they'll be subjected to Mimoko's slaps and tearful embrace. However, there's still a few loose ends to wrap up before Season 4 ends, notably challenging Maestro Frisch and resolving some issues with his SPCMs. There is also a mystery that needs to be solved, so see if you can solve it before the answer to it is revealed in the final chapter of the season.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:138

    Oct 31, 2024

    Author's Commentary #136:

    Time to talk about Chapter 136: Grandstanding.
    If you didn't already hate Pewler, this chapter will sure as hell make you hate him. Not only did he take down Carol, but he put on a whole kabuki theater show in order to garner sympathy from the public. This man truly is a vile manipulator.

    As for why the president and vice-president just flat out resigned and handed Pewler the reigns of power, he manipulated them into handing him the reigns of power. He did seek to beat them in DESPER battle to get them completely under his control, but was unable to due to the heavy security detail each one had. While he could theoretically force the president into a DESPER match even if his security detail is present, said guards would simply arrest Pewler following the match even if he did win. Thus, he kept his public image and his image before the president and vice-president clean in order to fully manipulate them.

    Now that Pewler's the president, he can do whatever he wants following his acceptance speech. The only good news is that Mimoko's back home, but sadly Pewler will abuse his authority to try and extradite her in order to imprison her for the rest of her life. Thing's aren't looking good for our heroes, but the season is still not over yet. While the heroine, Mimoko, might have been fooled, the sadistic anti-hero, Iori, isn't playing around.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Oct 31, 2024

    Author's Commentary #134:

    Time to talk about Chapter 134: A moment of peace.
    Originally, the chapter was called, The morning after, witth the title of the chapter being a clever pun on the word, "mourning" as Carol and Mimoko are mourning Iori, since they think she's dead. It could also be taken at face value since the chapter originally took place the morning after the girls were attacked. Since the girls are now back in Japan and it's evening, I had to change the title to, A moment of peace.

    As for the chapter, it mainly focuses on wrapping up Carol's backstory. The most notable part being her history with LinZay. All I'll say on LinZay is that she has already made an appearance in the story and as such, I won't give a bio on her, since I've actually already done so. I will give a bio on Carol's boyfriend, Christian though.

    クリスチャン・バーンズ (Christian Barnes) is how his name is spelled in katakana.

    His birthday is February 7th. I chose this date at random, so there's no greater meaning behind why this date is his birthday.

    He never played chess, though if he did, his favorite piece would likely be the rook.

    Now we're approaching the big confrontation of the season. It is worth noting that unlike in the original, Pewler now shows up in Japan to confront the girls. He got there in the same way the London Desperados were able to get to Okinawa. Believe it or not, I originally planned to just have the girls get warped straight to America instead of London first, but I felt it was the better choice narratively as the Fairy league will play a major role in the series.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Oct 31, 2024

    Author's Commentary #133:

    Time to talk about Chapter 133: Collective responsibility.
    This chapter once again hammers home the point that Iori is an absolute psychopath. She not only took out Horner, but everyone that was a part of the mob, all by tricking them into saying that they were united with Horner as one, thus the DESPER registered that statement as them consenting to being part of the bet, and since Horner lost, they too lost. As for why Iori chose a tornado, she wanted to both make the deaths look somewhat natural, and she just wanted an up close view of someone getting killed by a tornado.

    As for the game, Iori goes for maximum disrespect by opening with the Van't Kruijs Bongcloud and once again, besting her opponent. In the original draft for the game, I actually had her capture all the pieces, but that game didn't have a Bongcloud in it. Thus, I decided to go with the Bongcloud game instead since I felt it handed Horner a more humiliating loss. And now that all threats are gone, Iori is safe, and has warped away to a currently undisclosed location.

    It is worth noting that she simply could have killed Horner and warped away, but because she's so sadistic, she decided to kill all present in order to leave no witnesses. The place she warped to is also the reason Horner went so pale when he saw the conditions for the wager. Had he known Iori was that maniacal, he wouldn't have engaged her back at the secret puzzle cafe.

    One final thing I'll point out is that Phantom was the one that stepped in to stop Imelda from killing Iori and Carol on the spot. While Horner likely would have tried to have Imelda kill Iori if he knew of her true nature, Phantom being present would have prevented that anyway.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Oct 31, 2024

    Author's Commentary #131:

    Time to talk about Chapter 131: Emergency meeting.
    Originally the intro chapter for Season 5, I decided to swap things around and have this chapter occur in Season 4 as I felt it made more sense plot-wise. Many important long-term characters are introduced here. First up is Amelia Stavanger, the maestro of Norway.

    アメリア・スタヴァンゲル (Amelia Stavanger) is how Amelia's name is spelled in katakana. There's actually an interesting story behind her, as she was the character I decided would be one of the first players would meet if this series ever got a video game adaptation.

    Her birthday is September 23rd.

    Her favorite piece is the queen, though she refuses to elaborate why.

    As a brief aside, if this series ever got a video game adaptation, Amelia would actually be one of the first characters the player would encounter as they're getting set up. In the game. My idea is that for a tutorial, Amelia will ask the player how good they are at chess. If they answer, "new player" they'd get a brief overview of the game and play Himitsudono with assistance. If they answer "experienced" they skip the tutorial and jump straight into the tutorial match against Himitsudono with no help given. But if they answer "I'm a grandmaster" they are prompted with one final chance to reconsider before being forced to play Amelia, who's ai would secretly be rated 2700 for this match alone. Losing or drawing would result in a loss and the player being forced to go through both the beginner tutorial and the tutorial battle against Himitsudono as punishment. Brief aside over, lets talk about the other maestro, Ian Kimovich of Russia.

    イアン・キモビッチ (Ian Kimovich) is how his name is spelled in katakana. Йен Кимович is how I believe his name would be spelled in Russian.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His birthday is April 13th which he shares with 13th chess world champion, as well as one of the greatest chess players of all time, Garry Kasparov. His name is also a nod to Kasparov as Kimovich is actually Kasparov's middle name.

    His favorite piece is the queen, as that is the piece that has helped him win so many victories.

    With this, 5 of the 7 secret chess maestros have now been revealed. I will say that one of the two yet to be revealed was present at the meeting, but did not get a spotlight. Thus, their proper reveal will come much later in the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Oct 31, 2024

    Author's Commentary #130:

    Time to talk about Chapter 130: The sadism of humans.
    Obviously, the key part of this chapter is Iori's speech on sadism. It's actually something I've had cooking for a while, so I'm glad it's finally time to publish it. The speech perfectly showcases Iori's worldview, and shows how much she believes sadism is a biological human trait. I was honestly thinking of just having the chapter focus around the speech, but it would have been too short so I decided to include some more content.

    Speaking of which, Pewler's right hand man, Jacque Horner has made his debut. He's the chief editor of the accredited newspaper, The Blue Hornet. However, he's the complete opposite of journalistic integrity and frequently uses the paper's status as an "unbiased medium" to slander and demonize all who Pewler order him to.

    ジャック・ホーナー (Jacque Horner) is how his name is spelled in katakana. His name is obviously a pun on Jack Horner from the Little Jack Horner nursery rhyme. I originally based his design off of Bruno Bangnyfe from Burn the Witch, but later redesigned him to look more like Duke Everlue from Fairy Tail.

    His birthday is November 3rd, which is the day the paper with the infamous "Dewey defeats Truman" headline was released. This is fitting considering the headline was incorrect, and Horner often writes incorrect articles.

    His favorite piece is the bishop, as he believes himself to be Pewler's bishop that spreads his gospel via the press.

    Things look to get serious, but before the matches begin, things will briefly shift over to Daria's side in order to get an update on Katie's status and the WWCF's thoughts on all that has happened thus far.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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