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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Jan 19, 2026

To:Sammi9519

That he did. Though the end result was the same, originally the game used wasn't quite as satisfying for a climax, so I ended up rewriting the game, and I'm glad I did. Now Mimoko just needs to get back to the playing hall in time to avoid a forfeit.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:35

Jan 19, 2026

To:Taylor J

No kisses for the playboy.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:52

Jan 17, 2026

As I said before, I'm more in the camp of ending the story now as if you go with your 15-20 more chapters plan, it might feel too dragged out. That and there's only 3 days left until the deadline. Unless you've got stuff already written, writing over 10 chapters in 3 days is a tall order, though doable.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:30

Jan 17, 2026

They have pictures or are they just words, and even then, he could always fall back on the "AI generated" excuse, unless it's a full video, then it's harder to disprove.

【Vodcast】 Error Love

Chapter:20

Jan 17, 2026

Author's Commentary #687:

Time to talk about Chapter 687: Hagemi's take-out evenings.
I'm not going to try and defend the naming scheme for this one. Of the bunch, I feel Hagemi's routines are probably the simplest of the bunch

She's very similar to Daria in routine, but spends more hours at WWCF HQ on average than her. Not much else to say about her.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:687

Jan 17, 2026

To:Mai

Thanks for reading. Hope you enjoyed it.

Limelight Blight

Chapter:28

Jan 16, 2026

No review assuming this isn't the real ending. But if it is, I'll come back and do it later.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:29

Jan 16, 2026

You can tell my brain's on too much chess when the first thing I think of when I see "Mittens" is Mittens the cat.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:28

Jan 16, 2026

Now the text formatting is down pat. Well done.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:27

Jan 16, 2026

To:lolitroy

The Kerochan line, right? It's broken up by Koharu's actions, which I feel might be the source of this as it leads to italicized text and non-italicized text in the same paragraph.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:24

Jan 16, 2026

To:lolitroy

... Were you not kidding about only being finished with the first half of the story?

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:25

Jan 16, 2026

Looks like I missed the art spammer... Anyway...

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:26

Jan 16, 2026

Unless the epilogue I got notified about isn't the actual ending, I think I might be able to finish reading this in a single go.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:25

Jan 16, 2026

To:lolitroy

Right now it feels cluttered as the lines are all mushed into a paragraph. Just the italicized lines on their own are fine as when everything's mushed up into a paragraph, it gets a little jarring to read.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:24

Jan 16, 2026

To:lolitroy

She's wearing a skirt, isn't she? Or did I miss that she isn't.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:22

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