Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    May 07, 2025

    Author's Commentary #293:

    Time to talk about Chapter 293: The one who's paying for dinner.
    With the 3rd round over, it's time for some downtime, meaning I'm going to introduce some more new characters. As such, this commentary will naturally focus on the bios for all these new characters, so without further ado, let's begin.

    ジャスティン・ベバー (Justin Beaver) is how Justin's name would be spelled in katakana. His name is an obvious parody of Justin Bieber. Since Beaver in Japanese is literally ビーバー, which is the same as Bieber's last name, I changed the katakana from ビーバー to ベバー for Justin's official Japanese name. As for the mop bucket bit, it stems from the fact that over a decade ago, Justin Bieber infamously peed in a mop bucket. For some reason, that's always stuck with me so when I created a Justin Bieber parody character, this was the top trait I slapped on to him.

    His birthday is March 1st, which he shares with Canadian pop icon, Justin Bieber.

    His favorite piece is the knight because he said so.

    グリズリー・スナッグラー (Grizzly Snuggler) is how Grizzly's name would be spelled in katakana. He's an obvious parody of Bear Hugger from Punch-Out!!. Grizzly actually appeared way back in Chapter 268, as he was the one standing atop the table with the maple syrup.

    His birthday is October 24th, which is when Super Punch-Out!! first released.

    His favorite piece is the pawn, mainly because they're the simplest piece on the board.

    イネス・ペレヤ (Inez Pereya) is how Inez's name would be spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is May 25th which is World Football day, making the fact that she despises the sport all the more ironic.

    Her favorite piece is the bishop.

    マリナ・ドラクレシュティ (Mălina Drăculești) is how Mălina's name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is November 2nd, which she shares with Voivode of Wallachia, Vlad the Impaler.

    Her favorite piece is the queen.

    アヤネ・ロドリゲス (Ayane Rodrigues) is how Ayane's name is spelled in katakana. Her name in kanji is 明夜音, and means "reveal", "night", and "sound".

    マヤネ・ロドリゲス (Mayane Rodrigues) is how Mayane's name is spelled in katakana. Her name in kanji is 麻耶音, and means "hemp", "irony", and "noise".

    イノリ・ロドリゲス (Inori Rodrigues) is how Inori's name is spelled in katakana. Like her daughters, she does have a kanji spelling of her name with it being, 祈理, which means "pray" and "reason".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Inori and the twins' birthday is May 5th, which they share with Ichika, Nino, Miku, Yotsuba, and Itsuki from the Quintessential Quintuplets.

    Ayane's favorite piece is the knight since it can hop over everything, while Mayane's favorite piece is the queen as it is the most powerful piece on the board. Inori's favorite piece is the queen as well.

    The twins and their mother are yet another homage to the Quintessential Quintuplets. In fact, the twins actually are quintuplets, though not all their siblings are present in Budapest. There's also an intriguing behind-the-scenes story with these characters. In the original upload of art of the Brazilian team, Inori Rodrigues was a completely different character, but after deciding to have there be twins, the original Inori was given a new name and ported over to another team. Mayane was then dubbed Inori with the current Inori being dubbed, Shinobu. However, I ultimately decided to change Inori's name to Mayane, as I feel it works better in the grander scheme of things, meaning Shinobu was now the new Inori Rodrigues. It's crazy how that name has now been given to three different characters.

    As such, it resulted in Inori now debuting here as I felt it would be best to have her debut alongside her daughters. This might cause some confusion for readers that aren't aware of this retcon, but if you're aware of it, just know that any mention of Inori in the story refers to the mother, while Mayane refers to Ayane's sister. And one final thing to note about Inori is that she is a DSPCM. Since she's not competing, it means she's helping out with the staff and working overtime to manage the secret puzzle cafes of the SPCMs and DSPCMs competing.

    And with that, all the new characters have been introduced, but now things shift towards the match between Mălina and Mimoko. Unlike the previous 3 times, Okisato won't be having a midnight match so to say. I'll go more in depth on this though in my commentary for the next chapter.

    That's all for his commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    May 07, 2025

    Author's Commentary #426:

    Time to talk about Chapter 426: The end of the ghost story.
    And now, we can finally talk about Vonnie. Turns out she really is a ghost. She's obviously meant to be a homage to the vanishing hitchhiker ghost from various cultures' folklore. It might have been a bit obvious though due to her name. Anyway, time for her bio.

    ヴォニー・オットソピスタ (Vonnie Ottosopista) is how Vonnie's name would be spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is November 29th, which she shares with Mexico's first ever grandmaster, Carlos Torre Repetto.

    Her favorite piece is the knight.

    When doing some research, I found out that there was in fact an unofficial Chess Olympiad that took place in Budapest in 1926. The Mexican Defense, or Black Knights' Tango, originated a few years earlier, so Vonnie actually is aware of the move. Now that her curse has been broken, she's now free to roam all throughout the world. She's still a ghost, but that's besides the point.

    As for the other Mexicans, their transformation was primarily achieved via makeup. However, their eyes changing colors was not achieved via makeup. And that brings me to a major change from the original vision of this plotline. Originally, the Mexicans would challenge Okisato, dawning ghostly face paint just like they do here. However, upon being beaten, they reveal that they're all in fact humans just playing a prank, though Vonnie would still be revealed to be an actual ghost. But now, they're more tied to something that will become a major factor in the series going forward. I won't reveal much more due to spoilers, but I will say there are some hints regarding just why their eyes turned blue and what it could possibly signify.

    As for the game featured at the end of the chapter, it's actually the game from the original draft of Season 4 where Okisato challenged Raymond to an informal match over a video call. I thought the plotline was dumb, which is why I removed the game, but now just like the cut game between Okisato and Mimoko from Season 2, I brought in back, meaning now there isn't a single cut game in the series anymore.

    But with this mini-arc complete, we now inch closer to round 8. There will be a few more shenanigan chapters before it, but some of these will both be important, and scratch an itch I've been wanting to scratch for a while throughout the duration of this arc of the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    May 07, 2025

    Author's Commentary #120:

    Time to talk about Chapter 120: The power of the narrative.
    This is honestly a make or break chapter for me. This is obviously the part where Pewler shows his true manipulative nature and gives a grand villain speech while also being philosophical. I'm honestly not sure if I nailed that, but I hope I did. His value on controlling the narrative is a major part of his character and I hope to make him a hatable, but well-written villain.

    As for his speech regarding the king, it actually stems from him hating having to defend the king since in his mind, the king is dead weight and the other pieces could thrive without it. Of course, he believes that only he shouldn't have to defend a king while his opponent should. There is greater significance behind why this bit is in his speech, but revealing it now would be a massive spoiler for the story.

    As for the political parties, the names are actually in Latin. Misericordia can translate to "compassion" or "mercy" while Ratiocinatio translates to "reasoning". Thus, the parties could be considered the Reasoning party and the Compassion party.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    There was also a reference to the infamous Ruchi Ookuma from Escape Witch, Mystery Ghost Foresight, and Spice of life who was the original evil politician character I created for my novels. I'd argue that Pewler is now worse and more manipulative than her, but only because he has the power of the DESPER. If he didn't have that, he'd still be pretty successful, but not emboldened to try and reconstruct the world in a dystopian utopia to rule over.

    As for his secretary, Lindsey, she's fully aware of Pewler's true nature and has already lost a DESPER match to Pewler to ensure she remains loyal to him. Essentially, she's to Pewler what Ai was to Michiko, though Pewler has no intention of just tossing her to the side, as unlike Ai, she's completely loyal and unwavering and not a quasi proxy. Imelda on the other hand is more of a Pewler fangirl.

    イメルダ・ベリンシュ (Imelda Berrinche) is how her name is spelled in katakana. Her last name, Berrinche, actually means "tantrum" in Spanish.

    Her birthday is March 4th. I chose this date at random so there's no greater significance behind why this date is her birthday.

    Her favorite piece is the amazon, mainly because that's Pewler's favorite piece, and like him, the queen is her favorite normal chess piece.

    Imelda is actually one of the biggest things I revised about the arc. She now debuts much earlier and her role in the story will be different. I also made her far more hatable than in the original, like top 2 most hated characters in the entire series hatable.

    On a different note, some other things I've added are Pewler's conversation with Scharlachrot. I felt it was necessary to show that these two Desperados were not the ones Iori and co were tasked with hunting down. The change will also serve to better build up a plot point that will come up later in the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    May 07, 2025

    Author's Commentary #421:

    Time to talk about Chapter 421: A Mexican ghost story.
    I've been waiting months for this, but now it's finally come to fruition. Ever since I settled on having a Mexican team compete in the tournament, I knew I'd theme the members around some of the famous ghosts of Mexican folklore. The only exception is Urraca, though she is loosely inspired by the Teotihuacan Spider Woman. Speaking of which, it's now finally time to do the Mexican team's bios now that their big secret is out in the open.

    チワワ・ビブリオテカリオ (Chihuahua Bibliotecario) is how Chihuahua's name would be spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is October 12th, which is the day the city of Chihuahua was founded.

    Her favorite piece is the queen.

    フェルナンダ・プランチャド (Fernanda Planchado) is how Fernanda's name would be spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is March 13th, which is the day Mexico City was founded.

    Her favorite piece is the bishop.

    トリスティン・リオ (Tristin Río) is how Tristin's name would be spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is November 17th, which is the day the 1960 film, La Llorona, was released.

    Her favorite piece is the knight.

    ウラカ・アラニャ (Urraca Araña) is how Urraca's name would be spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is March 14th, which is Save a Spider Day.

    Her favorite piece is the queen.

    As highlighted in the chapter, each of these characters with the exception of Urraca, is themed around a certain ghost from Mexican folklore. Their names all foreshadowed whoch ghost they had affinity to, with Chihuahua's referencing the city, Chihuahua, where the legend of La Pascualita took place, Fernanda's being a very tongue and cheek reference to La Planchada, and Tristin's being the most creative in my opinion as her surname references the fact that La Llorona is often said to haunt bodies of water such as rivers, while her name itself is based off of the French word, triste, which can translate to "sad" or "sorrowful". Urraca's name also references the Teotihuacan Spider Woman as araña is literally Spanish for "spider".

    And now that the secret is out, Mimoko and co must now face them all in order to avoid becoming their lackeys. One thing I will state now is that the role of these characters is now much more important than in the original planning phase. I'll explain more about that when this mini-arc concludes in this arc of the series.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:421


    May 07, 2025

    And I just realized this story was a giant Splatoon 3 reference all along. First off, congratulations on finishing this story. I know you struggled a lot when writing this one, so it's good to see you manage to cross the finish line.

    Now it's review time, and well, it sucks... OK, it doesn't suck suck, but I do feel it is vastly inferior to Food Truck and some of your other works. Just comparing the story to the original synopsis, it felt like this was meant to be more of Food truck requiem, but it quickly became more of a rescue mission story. Not that it wasn't still enjoyable, but it really did show that the story was struggling to find it's footing more often than not.

    Finally there's Rom. To be honest, I'm really mixed on him. He started off as a selfish robot seeking to abuse his owner just to prolong his life, but ended up getting a redemption arc... and being completely overshadowed henceforth by MVP Jethro, especially in these last few chapters due to just how OP Jethro is and Eddy giving a crash course on what happens when you push a hikikomori over the edge.

    But with the negatives out of the way, let's look at the positives. You managed to finish the story, and while it may not be your best work, the sequel potential, or rather, crossover potential, is really there, as with Jethro and the gang in space, I could easily see them meeting up with the Food truck gang some time in the future. Speaking of which, Jethro is the MVP. That man carried this story in his survival backpack he got from Preppersonly.com. Seriously, Jethro was easily the best part about this story along with Eddie finally snapping and saving the day. Be proud that you completed this story on time, and of course, good luck in the contest.

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