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Jul 27, 2026
To:Jen_F
I liked this idea of their last section of the journey being the most dangerous, and another moment of Sayane’s lyrics having more meaning than she could have imagined.
Jul 25, 2026
everyone collectively got in a group chat and planned out how they would find a way to give Azag the little nudge he needed…
precisely! she may not know exactly what her path will look like, but her time in the shadows of the Underworld is over.
The Silence’s cruelty couldn’t stay hidden forever. Sayane is about to have a legitimate emotional validation for her conflict with The Silence.
To:Goose
Itonlygetsworse thanks for checking it out, Goose!
To:ennodaye
yep! I wanted a tour concept but also very traditional “go warrior, find great weapons” trope.
I liked pulling the reference to her first song. a fun study in how song lyrics can carry very different meanings in different moments.
not yet…
Jul 23, 2026
Ending lines: Yo dawg I heard you like moons. So I put some moon stuff if a story written by a moon.
See Luphor made a rookie mistake. Real versions of things may be scary or unpleasant. But a plushie version of them will always be adorable.
Jul 22, 2026
I liked that her and Azag both grow as leaders in their own way, but at the end of the day their core strength comes for caring for people and wanting to help. they use their strengths in different ways. Sayane nurtures and calms them. Azag protects and provides. I wrote all of this thinking of it as though it was a founding/origin story of a nation sort of thing. like Sayane and Azag accidentally become the founding figureheads of a new world.
exactly! a new fandom indeed.
Jul 21, 2026
I looooove the ways Sayane and Azag heal and nurture one another on their journey. it’s definitely a core theme. from him touching her to calm and reset her to her singing to him to let him have a bit of relief. and it only grows in Pt II!
I loved Sayane’s question. poor girl was flustered she couldn’t help but slip that. but fun bts aspect, this character wasn’t originally supposed to be her first captor. At first I’d imagined it as someone wholly new and fresh to Sayane that would give them all a lens of innocence within the Silence. but then the idea for Echo’s redemption arc came to me literally while writing that previous chapter, and I found that vastly more interesting.
yoooooou might be onto something. you’re about to really meet one of my favorite characters from part I! and yep I’m glad Sayane and Azag got to have a small but major moment of connection. they’ve been through A LOT together already, and the hints of interest and longing have been building, but I liked the idea of having this be the big moment of catharsis where they’re finally partially acting on their feelings.