Feb 28, 2026

love the vibe that everyone and everything seems slightly off here.

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Feb 28, 2026

Interesting that they are seemingly former humans. I like how that will potentially give us some more moral complexity in the fights.

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Feb 27, 2026

To:Mara

yep! Kohaku Rin, if you didn’t know, you’ll occasionally see that a handful of readers will randomly wind up on certain novels to read and comment. those comments build and go to the algorithm’s counter, so the homepage’s featured weekly novels get updated. Moon and Mara are also on one of my stories right now lol.

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Feb 27, 2026

To:Mara

Mara’s here! party time in the chat.

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Feb 27, 2026

side note, double check your description on the novel. I think you have to say you’re submitting to the contest and say what prompt. and make sure you have the NOVELOUS box checked.

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Feb 27, 2026

this is well done! you unveil a lot of character early on and have lovely prose.

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Feb 26, 2026

To:Moon

side note now y’all have me rereading this finally. gods I love this story.

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Feb 26, 2026

To:Jen_F

it’s going to get much worse. and yes just like the descriptions of Eden, I wanted to really paint this place as true unsettling misery. fun fact a lot of this description is based on personal life experience. the stapler throwing is a real reference.

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Feb 26, 2026

To:Nato_otan1

or will he go mad from being haunted by harbingers of horror that he never knows how to decipher? imagine being constantly alerted that something, something, bad is going to happen. but you don’t know who, or where or how…

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Feb 26, 2026

To:Nato_otan1

thank you! and yep I wanted to give the description emotion but also a very cold, analytical analysis.

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Feb 26, 2026

To:Nato_otan1

yep as grotesquely interesting as it is, hair doesn’t just magically disintegrate when a body gets pulverized. so clumps of hair will be there in the mass and red.

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Feb 26, 2026

To:Nato_otan1

good to see you, friend! and yep get ready to just be uncomfortable and unnerved for nearly the whole read.

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Feb 25, 2026

To:Moon

I’d like to imagine y’all are actually just summoning the next version of Clarissa…

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Feb 25, 2026

To:Moon

can you feel the fire growing?

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Feb 25, 2026

oh nothing is ever random. 🙃
I don’t know if these are 100% accurate but the free binary translation tool gave them to me and they’re supposed to say these things:
Miu
I’m here
oh gods no
come back
to me
please come back to me
it wasn’t supposed to be
I’ll find you again I swear

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