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Jul 13, 2026
To:Moon
and they’re both starting to realize that as well, which makes it all the more tragic.
yep!
I wanted him to be gentle, not an edgelord that devolved into a monster or a selfish jerk. no matter how far he’s breaking, he’s still kind to those who deserve it.
you might be on to something
exactly
as horrifying as it is, this is one of my all time favorite chapters I’ve ever written
but yes, going back to the isolation practices. very much a real thing. I wasn’t trying to be an outsider telling other people what’s wrong with their culture or anything, so I tried to write this simply imagining the horror and loneliness of those issues. that’s the true horror in this for me- just the way things across so many cultures are tolerated, and how so many people are forgotten or ignored, and we all accept it.
someone caught it!🤣
I really liked the daughter’s rage. and yep things at the office will not go well.
yep I wanted this scene to be as much of a sensory nightmare as an emotional one.
I wanted to do a traditional horror moment, so that was a jump scare scene.
maybe. or maybe it’s actually worse
this was one of my favorite chapters to write. the dialogue is pretty simple and straightforward, they’re just engaging like normal people, yet for them, it’s a huge moment of personal connection.
oh you’ll see.
prepare for hand art!