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Welcome to my niche corner. I don't read light-novels, and I don't really write 'em. So I don't know why I'm here.

registered at: Mar 23, 2025

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May 18, 2026

To:1R

Feel ya on that. It can be a bit rough getting it all into the first draft, ngl. Mine are always messes until I sort them out, so don't worry I get it

POWER SACH

Chapter:13

May 18, 2026

Hm, interesting. Wonder what's up with sleepy? The first part threw me off a lil, though, with Riku referencing these people who weren't mentioned at all last chapter as if we should know them, especially Ice-cold and the pretty gal. It kinda feels a bit... off-kilter? Tbf I often end up with random details in rough drafts that I intend to backtrack in later, so maybe that's what's going on here. Otherwise the chapter's okay. It's a bit middling if I'm honest. Interesting, but not much except Riku's snarky comments going for it. It might be worth having more of a point of interest in there, like hyping up sleepy girl's weirdness with some interaction, or perhaps the other characters sniping back at Riku's comments. There's actually not any interaction going on at all in this chapter, and it feels a bit empty, especially with how good Riku and Lily's interactions tend to be. I kinda miss that, because it's done well and it could really improve things here if some of that personality was injected into these new characters I assume will be with us for the next few chapters.

POWER SACH

Chapter:13

May 17, 2026

That was fun. Can't believe I almost forgot to read it (my library's a mess 😔), but once I did I got pretty invested, as me sitting here having finished it over a couple days is testament to. Any critique I'd have is covered by others here, but yeah man I enjoyed that. Good ending, too. I'm kinda sad it's finished, actually

Hit Me Like A Meteor

Chapter:24

May 17, 2026

"I backed up, praying this wasn't some sort of scam where she wanted to collect child support"
*cough* not sure if you're aware of this, Hade, but it takes more than breathing in the vicinity of your glorious presence and the sound of your melodic voice to produce that kind of effect

Hit Me Like A Meteor

Chapter:19

May 16, 2026

To:Taylor J

Finally got back here from the start Gotta say it's even better with context

Hit Me Like A Meteor

Chapter:18

May 16, 2026

Oh man the comments are almost as funny as the chapter on this one

Hit Me Like A Meteor

Chapter:6

May 16, 2026

Dangggg I forgot how full of himself this guy is That book to the face is perfection 👌

Hit Me Like A Meteor

Chapter:2

May 12, 2026

Fun story! It's a happily-ever-after for our two lovebirds. Honestly I laughed more than I was expecting to. Very funny, very romantic, 9/10