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World record in slow writing, mostly experimenting with my stories.

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registered at: Apr 07, 2025

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Dec 03, 2025

To: Epti

Fair enough! He could did it in a regulated way but chose to eliminate all spirits...and that made him the villain 👍🏻

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:24

Dec 03, 2025

Ngl painting with his own blood on his body was badass 🔥

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:25

Dec 03, 2025

To: Epti

I see, it make sense with the contest rules. It's such a shame thought that could've been a minor tweak.

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:23

Dec 03, 2025

Love the faint parallel between kaito and mr.kagi. Both have an accidental hand in a loved one's demise. Though mr.kagi went the extreme rampage path.

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:24

Dec 03, 2025

Minor nitpick, I think it was slightly uncool for Mr kagi to spit out his motivation, maybe closing his eyes and remembering his killed family Is better than talking with kaito. knowing will not change kaito's conviction any way. Nonetheless the scene still good as it is now :)

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:23

Dec 03, 2025

To:Earlo_18

That's will be fun to see. I feel like they can reach peace between their clans. Not before epic fight of some kind though.

Speaking of fighting I don't know why but I totally imagine them fighting over group assignments if they're in the same class 😂

THE TALE OF A MODERN DAY DEMON KING

Chapter:5

Dec 03, 2025

The demon king reached stage V 😂👽 oh osamu if you knew. Glad she got away with it although I suspect shun knows, he gives me mysterious vibes.

The collage is the same one kuro attend if I'm not mistaken right? If they met in collage while managing their hidden identities that would be fun to see

THE TALE OF A MODERN DAY DEMON KING

Chapter:5

Dec 02, 2025

To: Epti

I would give you my honest opinion for sure.

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:21

Dec 02, 2025

To: Epti

Yeah I agree with your point but personally my brain treat a story and its ending (which extend to the final arc) separately. I just learned to give grace in that regard after reading and watching a lot of great stories that I loved until the ending bamboozled me. You can say I rarely get disappointed anymore :P

And to be honest after trying writing myself I gave even more grace. This is harder than it looks.

Aside from the story itself I'm excited to see what direction you (and others) take with your story, as someone who's writing I enjoy learning from y'all.

Sorry I don't know why I wrote all this thanks for coming to my ted talk XD

ps. sorry for the late reply my internet is wacky now.

The Last Ink-Mage

Chapter:21

Dec 02, 2025

To:Earlo_18

That's really reassuring. I kinda want to write more chapters like this but I have to figure out how to make them shorter. Almost 3000 words is diabolical 😭

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:10

Dec 02, 2025

To:Earlo_18

I experimented my heart out with this chapter, hope it wasn't too all over the place.

Uncanny Valley

Chapter:10

Dec 02, 2025

Such a captivating start!!

Cursed Creature

Chapter:1

Dec 01, 2025

This is so fluffy excited to see their development

When RYO Met Neko-chan

Chapter:1

Nov 30, 2025

To:Mai

Hi!

I see! No wonder I remembered the old days while reading 🥰

Yeah I changed it, thought no one will notice xD

Baby Magic 101

Chapter:2

Nov 28, 2025

To:Terrycat

I know right?

Baby Magic 101

Chapter:2

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