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Paul Losonso

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📚 Writer | Storyteller | Observer of the quietly strange. Sharing fiction, fragments, & thoughts on the creative life.

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Oct 15, 2025

To:Mai

I feel flattered 😊

You, carry on the good writing ✍️
And I'll comment as much as my gray matter and time allows!

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:2

Oct 15, 2025

To:Mai

Lengthy, yes.
But, it was complete! 👍

I had a lengthy one broken in three. I think one big would be better 😋

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:1

Oct 14, 2025

I really like how you describe both the events and the protagonist’s emotions.
The dialogues are great too — they feel completely believable.
"This can't be how I die" was such a striking line.
And the way her feeling at the end mirrored her dream... part of me expected it, and part of me secretly hoped for it.

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:2

Oct 14, 2025

I can almost picture this as an 80’s anime – a high-stakes, full of tension, epic moments TV show 👍

Cyanic Odyssey

Chapter:4

Oct 14, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

Some reason I missed this comment before!
By now you already know/ read what happens at Red's side of the story, so no spoilers 😅

About Bard, we all have those around whom we can be more open – be ourselves.
And I think being around a hearth helps us all on that... and proper music too!

Also, thanks for liking those Gallery pictures 😊👍

The Common Ground

Chapter:15

Oct 14, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

If it feels like a last stand and even a wee bit terrifying, then I’m truly glad 😊

As for the Shaded – there are all kinds of them! I leave most to the reader’s imagination on purpose…
But you’re right – they shouldn’t be expected (and that’s what I aimed for) to be as organized as they appeared, marching in ranks as they do. It’s an important detail.

The Common Ground

Chapter:16

Oct 14, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

I'm glad you think so! 😊
You know, all three “The Last Watch” chapters were originally meant to be just one long one.
I just… tried to keep within the 1,000–1,500 word suggestion, since I thought it was mandatory back then.

The Common Ground

Chapter:17

Oct 14, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

Yeah. They were all brave – they’d accepted their fate.
They had to.
For the Tarlmerefolk 🫡

The Common Ground

Chapter:18

Oct 14, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

I just hope I explained it all well enough – those are important details about life on the common ground 🤓

The Common Ground

Chapter:20

Oct 14, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

Yes! It was meant to be tragic...
As well as the song the bard (and all) sang before the fall.

I'm glad the eye colours element resonated with you 😊👍

The Common Ground

Chapter:19

Oct 14, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

Exactly! They didn't.
And -I believe- they were masters of the see mainly because they had conquered all the land around it ⚔️
But, this is a whole new world... so, new chapter for them too! ⛵

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:22

Oct 14, 2025

Nice world building on the previous chapter... and on this one the point of view has changed and "we" are the explorers!
I always love some "Master and Commander", regardless the era... and right now we've been hooked/ "tricked" to turn the page right away real nicely!

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:22

Oct 14, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

Hahaha – while writing about Tarlmere again and again I also realized the similarity to Tamriel... but, I had advanced quite a bit by then and actually never changed it (still).

I'm so glad you liked the campfire scene, by the way. It's also one of my favourite "moments"!
I actually wanted to upload a snowy one, but it was hard to make.

The Common Ground

Chapter:15

Oct 14, 2025

To:Mai

I'm so glad you think so! I've been investing a lot of gray matter into the descriptions, so that's wonderful to hear 😊

And thank you for mentioning the dividers! I was actually worried I might be using them too often, so your comment is a huge relief 😮‍💨

The Common Ground

Chapter:12

Oct 13, 2025

I'm now intrigued about those Blue Conch Tribes 😲
...as well as the Atlantians (as I call in my head those sea-living peoples)

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:21

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