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Paul Losonso

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📚 Writer | Storyteller | Observer of the quietly strange. Sharing fiction, fragments, & thoughts on the creative life.

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Oct 13, 2025

Wow, it's only chapter three and it's already chaos! Seems the whole building will collapse!
The lead up was nice 👍🏻

Cyanic Odyssey

Chapter:3

Oct 13, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

Yeah, actually... I needed a comment about this!
I gave the chapter this name after I'd finish it (obviously) and it made total sense to me... but, was worried that using the very last sentence might actually be weird for the reader 😬
So, it strikes well in the end, right?

The Common Ground

Chapter:14

Oct 13, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

I'm glad you think so! 😊
Him being an architect was my inspiration to all this!
And yes, shades come in many types and forms... Not all become the same.

The Common Ground

Chapter:13

Oct 13, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

Hahaha - Yeah! The outhouse scene is precious 😁

And yes, concerning the shades, that's how I wanted to present it.
And I wanted to expand on that a bit more given time ✍️

The Common Ground

Chapter:12

Oct 13, 2025

To:Paul Losonso

The Common Ground

Chapter:11

Oct 13, 2025

So... well written!
Well done 👍

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:1

Oct 12, 2025

To:Mike Psellos

Hahaha! "Nuke" it 🤣

I...
I don't know what you're talking about 😅

The Common Ground

Chapter:14

Oct 12, 2025

To:Philip H Shen

Thank you for your comments Philip and thank you for keep reading 😊

That moment between them is a precious pause between what's happened so far and what to happen next.
If AI could, I would also stay there with them gazing the stars ✨

P.S. Exactly! Anything we say of the Bible is little compared to the grandeur of the single best book of all time...

The Common Ground

Chapter:11

Oct 12, 2025

Nice 👍🏻
An intriguing start that has me thinking "what lead to this?" & "what will happen next?"

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:0

Oct 12, 2025

Nice! 👍🏻
What a well played and great solution, that was: using the open sails to speed them down 💡

Pliniad: Roman Genius Will Unite This Godforsaken Realm

Chapter:20

Oct 12, 2025

To:Mai

Of course not! 😅

I'm so glad you find it vivid... that was my aim 😊

The Common Ground

Chapter:10

Oct 12, 2025

To:Mai

Always glad you liked it!
Thank you so much for reading 😊

The Common Ground

Chapter:9

Oct 12, 2025

To:Mai

Oh, my!
Thank you!
Such a positive remark 😀

I write everything only as I picture it in my head.

I'll read yours (warning: super slow reader [probably due to my dislexia]) and will tell you what I think of your fight scenes, and everything else 👍🏻
I'm sure you're just modest 😊

The Common Ground

Chapter:7

Oct 12, 2025

To:Mai

I'm so glad you think so!
Hope I don't disappoint 😊

The Common Ground

Chapter:6

Oct 12, 2025

To:Mai

Hey!
Thanks so much for reading 😊
Actually, the colour green does play its role later on. And you’re right, I completely agree about her character! I’ve had similar feedback from others, and if I’d had more time before the entry closed, I’d definitely have fleshed her out more (and probably still will later). I had to trim a lot to fit to the time limit 😅

The Common Ground

Chapter:5

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