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Sep 19, 2023

Hmm...

You know, I do have to wonder when we've got a bit too many plot threads started and also given focus. Like we have Issei's traumas with the tree and the break-up, which may end up being the same but for the sake of reading up until now, they're different. Then we have the agent thing that seems to be the first act conflict and now Murasaki's gone missing? I don't know, I feel like there's a lot of sprinklers going off all at once and I can't really get invested into any of them because they're just messing up the pacing by throwing curveballs into the plot. Iono, I feel like we could've used some more breathing room instead of being carpet-bombed with micro-conflicts.

Purple Prose

Chapter:8

Sep 19, 2023

Man has pipes good enough to make women weak in the knees hot damn. Honestly? Goals.

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Chapter:7

Sep 19, 2023

That bitch was STALKING that phone oml sobbing

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Chapter:6

Sep 19, 2023

Man should really take a break, man can't gain without rest. Unhealthy ass ethic.

Purple Prose

Chapter:5

Sep 16, 2023

For me, it's ball

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:14

Sep 16, 2023

Repetition sure seems bad innit?

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Chapter:13

Sep 16, 2023

Don't worry, Jessica, I choose you.

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Chapter:12

Sep 16, 2023

Buck-naked and drenched

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Chapter:11

Sep 14, 2023

Why is she asking Keith if that is him, didn't she literally give him her number?

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Chapter:10

Sep 14, 2023

Man straight up dogeza'd for a crumb of basketussy

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:9

Sep 14, 2023

Man straight up dogeza'd for a crumb of basketussy

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:9

Sep 14, 2023

What

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Chapter:8

Sep 14, 2023

Bro you got on the team, cheer up

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Chapter:7

Sep 14, 2023

bro built like a tank

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Chapter:6

Sep 14, 2023

Meet me there where it never closes
Meet me there where it's never hopeless
All is fair in love, oh-oh-oh
Honey, are you coming?

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Chapter:5

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