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Exophonic writer living in Tokyo. Writes and enjoys: Urban Fantasy / Historical Fiction / NSFW / Music / Drama / Slice of Life
Would love to exchange honest feedback!
Feb 24, 2026
This felt like reading CinderHayami and it was glorious
YAaaayy another historical novel! I’m already getting Asterix and Obelix vibes XD
To:Literate_Manul
Ohhh! It would be my honor! 👀 We could literally do an Ash and Silk locations tour! 😍
I’m so glad you thought so! Have you ever been to Asakusa at night? I can only imagine how creepy it must have been in the Edo period before electric lights! And even now something is eerie about that place at night…. More so than other places.
They do say, the bigger the light, the bigger the shadow…
Kaoru’s nonchalance already got him a ghost companion, nothing scares that man lmao
Thank you! Yes, thinking on his feet (or paws) might be Kaoru’s strength XD luckily for him the Tengu was not the brightest crayon in the box either.
And yes, my poor walking existential crisis baby :’) I’m glad you can relate to him (and sorry about that too lol)
DAYUM HAYAMI SCORING PRETTY HIGH IN THE SUCKY FATHER LEAGUE
His last comment was absolutely INFURIATING WTF. Nobody touch my girl Hayami this is personal now grrr
It only took a few chapters to go from “my jacket” to “my god(dess Hayami)”
Now that’s character development
Feb 23, 2026
See Hoodlum is a good name
Hayami is so patient with him, I fully thought she would have dumped his ass like “nah not even worth the six mil”
I admire her driving instructions under pressure
AMBIDEXTROUS LMFAO
Things I’m starting to like about Oto:
1. He thinks the stranger is hot despite still not knowing their gender. He’s an indiscriminate king. 2. He doesn’t argue about himself being stupid but accepts it. 3. Not knowing what stuff means is hilarious. I already spoilered myself a little with Hazama’s report card but I’m so ready
I repeat
Hoodie hoodlum can
GET
IT
Also Oto’s solution to everything is either sit still or throw money at it. Got it✅
The action in this chapter was so fluent and exciting I felt like I was on the heist train with them!
THE TIME HAS COME
LET THE LAFF READING BEGIN
(I thought I had already commented before but I hadn’t so here goes)
I am delighted to inform you that just like when I read this chapter for the first time, I can’t stand Oto. :D
But this time I’m very excited to find out why hoodie hoodlum stooped to kiss him. Cuz Hoodie hoodlum can GET. IT.
Yassss a happy ending 🥹🥰
This was a wonderfully sweet story 🥰 in so few words I really felt for Rory and Ewan and cheered for their love
It begs the question though if it is truly alright for Ewan to stay 👀 so many possibilities for a longer story. Would you ever consider writing more about them? If so, I’d love to read it!
I am intrigued by this nameless guardian. Their purpose and role are very clear. Not giving them any clear personality quirks makes Ewan and Rory stand out all the more which I’m sure was a deliberate choice
And it works, but I’m still curious about them haha
😭😭😭
No sensible comment here just NOOOOO POOR BOYS