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Exophonic writer living in Tokyo. Writes and enjoys: Urban Fantasy / Historical Fiction / NSFW / Music / Drama / Slice of Life
Would love to exchange honest feedback!
Feb 23, 2026
Ahhhh what a kiss <3 I could feel the sun, the cool water of the loch, hear the rustle of trees and finally taste the longing and slightly salty kiss…
This whole story feels like a beautiful summer holiday memory
Rory is so sweet 😭😭😭 I love his name. How could Ewan not fall for a guy like him
Ewan’s fragility and him being scared to fall for Rory are conveyed so real
Ahhh I had started reading this but I hadn’t finished it one go as I should have - but I did just now!! Now going back to comment haha
This is such a sweet, delicate opening. Is Ewan’s kind some type of being from Celtic folklore? Or did you imagine his kind? Whichever it is, I love it! I thought he was either an incubus or a Japanese variety that feeds on dreams, called muma 🥰 but I loooove the whole setting around the loch. Before my whole obsession with Japan began I had my Wiccan Goth/Pagan/celtic phase and I’m slowly circling back to it XD
To:Nato_otan1
Had to broaden my range lmao trying to get the straight readers back 🙂↕️
To:Casha
Thank you so much for picking up on all those details! 🥰
Your Kaoru roasts are sending me because you’re so right lmao. He’s very… easy to understand lol
Ahhh thank you!! This comment made me giddy with happiness 🥰 having this as an animated series one day would be AMAZING
I hope you’ll enjoy the upcoming chapters, even if their journey wasn’t all about those beautiful moments… 😅 Things are going to shift more to Yuame’s (the spirit) perspective now, so you’ll see what I mean…
GOTH GF LMAO
This comment made me laugh out loud 😂 and yes, Kaoru has a contagious laugh XD
lol he’s a bit of a pan disaster, he likes pretty things regardless of gender or what they even are 😆
Hi Casha, thank you so much for reading and commenting! I’m really glad you enjoyed the first chapter! <3
More about the characters will be gradually revealed as the story progresses, so I hope you will enjoy embarking on this journey with them! 👀
To:Literate_Manul
Yep, that’s them 👺 I imagined this one a little more handsome just because I can lol but the large red noses are pretty canon
They are not necessarily evil though! They appear in stories as proud forest guardians and they may have beef with rude travelers or sometimes prank people, but they are also known for training warriors in martial art!
Feb 22, 2026
AND SHE DOESN’T EVEN LIKE COFFEE
Girllllll Miyooooo you deserve so much better and I can’t wait to see that happen <3
Thoroughly enjoying this fantasy read! This is where the “traditional” isekai story takes off, but the build up has been exquisite!
This world sounds so exciting and fun! But I feel Melissa’s hunger XD can’t keep a hungry satyr girl waiting!
I loved how Hermes calls out Dionysus by reminding him he is the God of Liberation too, lol. What an exciting first arc!
Ohhhhh fiddlesticks 👀
A part of me wondered why Melissa didn’t tell Lucius this before Dionysus appeared but I suppose there was no time. Talk about improvisation though! And as fierce as she is, if she says “trust me” again I’ll have second thoughts if I was Lucius! XD
That was beautiful <3 like Casha said, this chapter showed their bond is already much deeper than surface level love.