May 18, 2022
To:Stekeblad
Hey there! Thanks for bringing this issue up, because I reread the entire manuscript again and saw a lot of minor inconsistencies (that managed to sneak past my three edits) which I corrected.
In any case, let's focus on your concern. I believe the answers for those would show in the later chapters of volume. The dialogues you brought up is actually 'canon', so I'm not editing those. In any case, I also think I may got some words jumbled up (being a non-native English speaker), so just to be sure, I'm going to run another proofread of the manuscripts of V11 and V12 to correct any inconsistencies.
As for Noir and Hurion's name, yep, it's the reverse. Nice work for figuring that one out. And yes, that part between Noir and Hurion's identity would be central to V13's plot, so please watch out for it. ^_^
I really appreciate your efforts for reading my work (and also calling me out for some mistakes). Thanks for your time and support! 😍
