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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Oct 28, 2024

JB! 😭 Well, actually, aside from that hit at the end, he wasn’t a great guy. Has to be awkward listening to people at his funeral try to think of good things to say about him.

Mary Lou Sunday

Chapter:11

Oct 26, 2024

Jinkies! Looks like we’ve got a mystery on our hands.

Mary Lou Sunday

Chapter:10

Oct 24, 2024

The CIA, you say? Good thing everything they touch, especially in the mid-20th century, turns out so well. Mary Lou is going to get a fine education.

Also, there’s the Bebop reference!

Mary Lou Sunday

Chapter:8

Oct 21, 2024

Hotwiring a car? Reffer Madness was right! It's a gateway to a life of crime!

Mary Lou Sunday

Chapter:5

Oct 21, 2024

Looks like these factory workers could use… a union. 😎🌅

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:1

Oct 21, 2024

To:Pope Evaristus

I can’t believe you did a reefer once.

Now that you mentioned it, I can see the Pynchon influence.

Mary Lou Sunday

Chapter:3

Oct 19, 2024

I can just picture the chrome and asbestos.

I'm enjoying this so far. How do you come up with some of this stuff? Especially the history of the asylum in the first few paragraphs of the first chapter seem so tangential compared to the rest of the story. Seems like a lot of effort to create something like that that only lasts a few paragraphs.

Mary Lou Sunday

Chapter:3

Oct 11, 2024

The.

The Sunless Kingdom

Chapter:3

Oct 01, 2024

To:Mario Nakano 64

It’s a movie and not a book, but Parts: The Clonus Horror kinda does that.

Giftear

Chapter:6

Aug 13, 2024

Orca mention spotted.

Hope all is going well with your next project!

(Not Exactly) In Search Of An Oasis

Chapter:9

Jul 05, 2024

To:Kirb

That's a fair point.

Magical Girl SNAFU - The Fires Of Hell

Chapter:3

Jul 05, 2024

Probably should have addressed it to Sora in the letter itself. Not like the guards are going to respect the sanctity of a sealed envelope.

Magical Girl SNAFU - The Fires Of Hell

Chapter:3

Jun 17, 2024

Definitely had me fooled right up until the end.

A Date in Spring

Chapter:1

Jun 16, 2024

"The iconic anime words!" 🤣

Camera-Man

Chapter:1

Jun 16, 2024

We're close to the deadline. Don't forget to mark this as completed!

Camera-Man

Chapter:1

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