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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Dec 31, 2024

To:lolitroy

Yes, it does. It’s partly a consequence of cutting down from 50k planned words to meet the contest deadline.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:18

Dec 30, 2024

Every catgirl should have balls of her own.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:27

Dec 30, 2024

Welcome to Rock'n Roll Night
Welcome to Rock'n Roll Fight
I'm just a Rock'n Roll MAN
We're just a Rock'n Roll BAND

Are robot ladies actually impressed by pies?

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:17

Dec 30, 2024

To:Slow

That would be extremely sci-fi, wouldn't it?

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:0

Dec 30, 2024

To:kazesenken

Learning you can dodge bullets may make you feel a bit invincible, and that can lead to overconfidence.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:16

Dec 30, 2024

To:Hype

Thanks! I thought about going Batman, but I felt it would be unrealistic for trained and hardened veteran soldiers to be taken by something like that.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:17

Dec 29, 2024

Of course.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:26

Dec 28, 2024

Zipper is *so* brave. RIP Franky Foo, though.

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:14

Dec 27, 2024

To:Deleted User

From the tea. If Oliver hadn't gulped it down all at once to make a point, it would have gotten all of them.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:14

Dec 27, 2024

That's exactly what I was going for. Thanks for checking it out!

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:1

Dec 26, 2024

"Don't cry, Al. Soon there'll be an even bigger war with even cooler mobile suits!"

And space tape.

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:12

Dec 23, 2024

Teach me how to karaoke chop.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:22

Dec 23, 2024

There’s been a lot of robot lovin’ in this contest, and unsurprisingly, I am here for it.

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:11

Dec 21, 2024

To:Hype

Same. I think I said it in another comment, but in many ways, Sprout was me when I was younger and stuck out in the sticks.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:9

Dec 21, 2024

To:Deleted User

Location descriptions are definitely a weak point of mine. I've been trying to keep them a bit minimal, to fit with the shot chapter word counts, but I can't blame it all on that. The biggest challenge of writing is translating the vivid images in your brain into words that others can understand in a way they find entertaining.

I do wonder if I should be more repetitive about some descriptions though. Others have said they had a hard time imagining the village, even though I described it as a large domed area with mostly farming fields and little huts housing nekomimi and machines.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:9

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