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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Nov 18, 2024

To:Kaisei

Ahhh, that explains the sudden jump there and back. Thanks for letting me know.

The Villainess of Caerleon

Chapter:8

Nov 17, 2024

Everyone stressing themselves out trying to produce something for their distant "saviors" and arguing about what the saviors really want? Why does that seem so familiar?

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:13

Nov 16, 2024

To:Mario Nakano 64

Life Alert: Help! My stock price has fallen and it can't get up!

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:1

Nov 15, 2024

But if the AI gravity field can get people up after they fall, then Life Alert will go out of business!

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:1

Nov 15, 2024

Discussing square roots and quantum thought experiments is so hood.

In all seriousness, things are starting to make a bit more sense because of that conversation.

Parallel in Two

Chapter:5

Nov 14, 2024

The ships being form over function reminds me of the imperial ships from LOGH, with the marble columns on the bridge that could crumble and crush someone if the ship took a hit.

The Villainess of Caerleon

Chapter:2

Nov 14, 2024

Sci-fi villainess? Everyone's sleeping on this because of the contest, but this is top-tier.

The Villainess of Caerleon

Chapter:1

Nov 13, 2024

Cute boy character? Why didn’t you say so earlier?

Iero

Chapter:2

Nov 13, 2024

Helium in the far future, huh? I wonder where they get it.

Hi Flyers!

Chapter:4

Nov 13, 2024

To:kazesenken

Ohhhh yeah. I split the chapter here because it seemed like a good cliffhanger and because if the recommended chapter length for the contest. But the next paragraph gets into that exact detail. So in my mind, it wasn’t a question I was trying to prompt the reader to consider, because I know what’s next and I don’t originally write it that way.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:2

Nov 13, 2024

To:kazesenken

Her hip servo was damaged by shrapnel from her chassis when she was shot. She kept on running until it broke completely. She didn’t necessarily want the cats to take it, but she needed *someone*, and they were the only ones nearby.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:2

Nov 13, 2024

Aha. The rope makes a lot more sense now.

Apocalypse Punk

Chapter:2

Nov 13, 2024

Beep bop.

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:2

Nov 13, 2024

To:Mech

Is that like being the master of unlocking?

Honestly, that's fair. It's early in the book. Not a lot of room for constructive criticism. And I did know what I was doing for these first few chapters, but I'm a bit less sure going forward, so it might be a bit of a bumpy ride.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:2

Nov 13, 2024

To:Mech

Shin Sekai Yori my beloved.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:1

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