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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Dec 30, 2024

To:Slow

That would be extremely sci-fi, wouldn't it?

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:0

Dec 30, 2024

To:kazesenken

Learning you can dodge bullets may make you feel a bit invincible, and that can lead to overconfidence.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:16

Dec 30, 2024

To:Hype

Thanks! I thought about going Batman, but I felt it would be unrealistic for trained and hardened veteran soldiers to be taken by something like that.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:17

Dec 29, 2024

Of course.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:26

Dec 28, 2024

Zipper is *so* brave. RIP Franky Foo, though.

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:14

Dec 27, 2024

To:Deleted User

From the tea. If Oliver hadn't gulped it down all at once to make a point, it would have gotten all of them.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:14

Dec 27, 2024

That's exactly what I was going for. Thanks for checking it out!

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:1

Dec 26, 2024

"Don't cry, Al. Soon there'll be an even bigger war with even cooler mobile suits!"

And space tape.

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:12

Dec 23, 2024

Teach me how to karaoke chop.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:22

Dec 23, 2024

There’s been a lot of robot lovin’ in this contest, and unsurprisingly, I am here for it.

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:11

Dec 21, 2024

To:Hype

Same. I think I said it in another comment, but in many ways, Sprout was me when I was younger and stuck out in the sticks.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:9

Dec 21, 2024

To:Deleted User

Location descriptions are definitely a weak point of mine. I've been trying to keep them a bit minimal, to fit with the shot chapter word counts, but I can't blame it all on that. The biggest challenge of writing is translating the vivid images in your brain into words that others can understand in a way they find entertaining.

I do wonder if I should be more repetitive about some descriptions though. Others have said they had a hard time imagining the village, even though I described it as a large domed area with mostly farming fields and little huts housing nekomimi and machines.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:9

Dec 21, 2024

To:Deleted User

Thanks for reading and commenting!

As for why the gynoid chose Sprout, I tried to convey that Sprout has more stamina than the other Nekomimi (shown when she outran Apollo), and the gynoid observed that (when she ran back to the watchtower without being winded). *Why* Sprout has more stamina isn't explained. It could be that some people have more stamina than others. It could also be that she exercises more than the other villagers because she doesn't want to become lazy like them.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:3

Dec 20, 2024

I too am afraid of Americans. And nukes.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:19

Dec 19, 2024

Good thing she mentioned that she was wearing underwear this time, or else I woulda thought she was showing Isla her bare self.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:18

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