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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Nov 24, 2024

Didn’t see the first version so I can’t comment on the changes, but “that hot nerd look” got a chuckle out of me.

Apocalypse Punk

Chapter:5

Nov 21, 2024

She’s looking after their behinds alright.

Hi Flyers!

Chapter:8

Nov 18, 2024

It’s always hard to decide exactly where to start a novel, but as I was reading this chapter, it struck me that it would make a decent first chapter.

Chrono Knight

Chapter:2

Nov 18, 2024

If you die in the Digiscape, you die in Canada.

Memoria

Chapter:4

Nov 18, 2024

Please don't take this as an insult, because I intend it as a compliment, but in addition to this story being very funny, I noticed that your writing has improved a lot in the last year.

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:6

Nov 18, 2024

To:Kaisei

Ahhh, that explains the sudden jump there and back. Thanks for letting me know.

The Villainess of Caerleon

Chapter:8

Nov 17, 2024

Everyone stressing themselves out trying to produce something for their distant "saviors" and arguing about what the saviors really want? Why does that seem so familiar?

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:13

Nov 16, 2024

To:Mario Nakano 64

Life Alert: Help! My stock price has fallen and it can't get up!

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:1

Nov 15, 2024

But if the AI gravity field can get people up after they fall, then Life Alert will go out of business!

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:1

Nov 15, 2024

Discussing square roots and quantum thought experiments is so hood.

In all seriousness, things are starting to make a bit more sense because of that conversation.

Parallel in Two

Chapter:5

Nov 14, 2024

The ships being form over function reminds me of the imperial ships from LOGH, with the marble columns on the bridge that could crumble and crush someone if the ship took a hit.

The Villainess of Caerleon

Chapter:2

Nov 14, 2024

Sci-fi villainess? Everyone's sleeping on this because of the contest, but this is top-tier.

The Villainess of Caerleon

Chapter:1

Nov 13, 2024

Cute boy character? Why didn’t you say so earlier?

Iero

Chapter:2

Nov 13, 2024

Helium in the far future, huh? I wonder where they get it.

Hi Flyers!

Chapter:4

Nov 13, 2024

To:kazesenken

Ohhhh yeah. I split the chapter here because it seemed like a good cliffhanger and because if the recommended chapter length for the contest. But the next paragraph gets into that exact detail. So in my mind, it wasn’t a question I was trying to prompt the reader to consider, because I know what’s next and I don’t originally write it that way.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:2

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