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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Jun 02, 2023

OK, I hate to be this guy, but I need the deep lore. My infantile brain craves it.

How did he lock her door without her keys?

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:2

Jun 02, 2023

Pizza time~

I can't help but notice a distinct lack of VTubing in this chapter.

The Vtuber Next Door

Chapter:2

Jun 02, 2023

I'm a simple guy. I see cats, I read. I like the setup and where this is going.

Ailurophobia

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

You somehow managed to make me feel guilty for blowing off my friends when I was a teenager decades ago because I was an incurable introvert and hated socializing. Nicely done.

BTW, if the president did come out with that top ten list, who do you think would make #1?

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

I second what Kitsune said. Love the imagery of the dreamscape.

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:0

Jun 02, 2023

To:Harmonica Writes

Oh, I love that. Maybe I should steal that idea and have her hide and play her horn, or convince a passerby to play it for her, every time she makes an entrance.

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

To:kazesenken

The "magic" of gunpowder.

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

To:Kitsune

Thank you for saying so! Making the decision to go with an action opening was really difficult. I think I posted 3 different chapter drafts in chat, but there were like 12 others that never saw the light of day.

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

To:WALKER

Admittedly, I was inspired by reading Ascendance of a Bookworm, in which the MC's common sense from Earth conflicts with the common senses of the people in the isekai world. I wanted to explore that more from the opposite direction, even though I know it will be a bit of a challenge to convey this world's common sense to the reader.

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

That was a nice tone curve at the end. I could really feel the franticness, and was refreshing after all the somber self-reflection.

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:1

Jun 02, 2023

"which would hopefully be soon" 😭

Museworld

Chapter:153

Jun 01, 2023

This one didn't change much from the first draft, but I can tell you put in the work to clean it up.

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2023

Contemporary setting is peak fiction. 😜

The Vtuber Next Door

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2023

I feel for the MC here. I always hated those kinds of long school speeches too.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:1

Jun 01, 2023

Even in fiction, the economics of the gaming business are brutal, and large content creators ruin things for people outside their fanbase.

This was a nice start!

Maniavolution

Chapter:1

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