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Oct 01, 2021

amen

Me doing whatever I felt like writing because I just thought it would be a fun idea.

Chapter:14

Oct 01, 2021

It all comes back to the chimpanzees

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Chapter:13

Oct 01, 2021

is, is this guy like crazy, or in danger. I cant tell. this is not what I expected

Me doing whatever I felt like writing because I just thought it would be a fun idea.

Chapter:12

Oct 01, 2021

MICKY MOUSE CLUBHOUSE. HE COMMING FOR YA

Me doing whatever I felt like writing because I just thought it would be a fun idea.

Chapter:11

Oct 01, 2021

what

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Chapter:10

Oct 01, 2021

:honeymon:

Me doing whatever I felt like writing because I just thought it would be a fun idea.

Chapter:9

Oct 01, 2021

Doesnt even want gold. what a looser

Me doing whatever I felt like writing because I just thought it would be a fun idea.

Chapter:3

Oct 01, 2021

w... wh... what?

Me doing whatever I felt like writing because I just thought it would be a fun idea.

Chapter:1

Sep 28, 2021

melon

Community Sudden Fiction Tournament Arc

Chapter:13

Sep 26, 2021

Melon

Community Sudden Fiction Tournament Arc

Chapter:10

Sep 25, 2021

To:Deleted User

Thanks a ton! Sorry, I'm so late in replying to this, life caught up to me. Hope you like the rest of the novel!

The Swordmaster and the New God

Chapter:0

Sep 16, 2021

はち (ill leave me review when I start ranking impossible romance)

UnCrowned

Chapter:16

Sep 16, 2021

nice chapter name

UnCrowned

Chapter:13

Sep 15, 2021

amongus. that's it. that's the review.

big fat glistening among us hairline.mp4 HD no virus

Chapter:16

Sep 15, 2021

ok, review time. doing this in a different format than I normally do. Overall, I thought the novel was ok. there's pothole here and there, but the overarching story makes up for it. Characters are good, if nothing special, and the plot is just ok. I will say the plot gets way better in the 2nd half though. Worldbuilding is good, but its sci-fi, so that's to be expected.
Overall though liked it. normally I would have a much longer review, but sadly college exams exist. good job and good luck

The Lindwyrm

Chapter:22

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