Aug 08, 2021
Ok, time for me to actually get to my review. To start off, I really liked the novel. it's written well with good diction and interesting characters. everyone feels unique. The world also feels unique. It's new, flashy, and exciting to read about. you make me want to hear more about it, and the people who live in it, in other words, you do a good job of drawing me in.
The main thing I wanted to say is that IMO, the protagonist feels somewhat bland the first few chapters, and that can make some people lose interest, but in the later chapters he is a million times better, and you can relate to him more.
Overall though, great job. (also if I said anything wrong, my bad. caught up at four in the morning, and was too lazy to write the review then)