Aug 24, 2021
I'm going to say it's usually hard to get me to read an entire 1st chapter, but I did
I loved the synopsis as well as the stream of consciousness narration + the entire concept of an elitist school... I mean this shit is just ingenious plus I actually managed to laugh quite a bit in the first half.
At the second half, however, I think you might have tried to introduce all the characters a little too fast. I think three is the limit for a scene... I managed to power through because I was interested in the synopsis and the initial hook (classes banded by abilities, the title, the very unfamiliar setting) but I think most readers would put it down during the conversations as it gets confusing.
Of course, I will read more, and feel free to disregard all of what I've just said :) Since i'm reading anyway, something in your writing spoke to me. Added to library
