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I try to make romantic stories. Age: 18 Gender: Male Insta: bryce.xs
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Sep 01, 2021
I have not been able to read as much as I wanted to but this is really good makes you keep stay your toes. Great job!!!
Ok so feed back time I think this could become a good book but I think there r a few things that need fix. You random started of with elves and how they can live under trees and can shoot arrows, so I think you should explain either the terrain of this world first or give a small narrating type beginning,and make longer chapoters. But aside from that this could be pretty good. Elves are one of my favorite enemy's in storys. I will be marking this in my library to I can see the next chapter. Ps. Check out my book if u can!!!
Aug 31, 2021
To:Real Aire
Sure thing bro them means a lot!!!
Aye th bro sure I will check it out.
Aug 29, 2021
Bro your writing is all good I need tips!!!
Aug 28, 2021
I love how you out this masterpiece together it's very intriguing!
Aug 26, 2021
To:cmoneyjr
Alright bet ty
Alright hold the phone my nigga..... You made a manga on coding and games.... I Love U So Much!!! My nigga u already know this is gonna be badass!!! This looks so cleannnnnn
Aug 25, 2021
Love how you have executed the story nicely.
How is it getting good in the first chapter!!! Keep it up
To:RexxDrink
Thankyou bro means a lot really!!! And I will check yours out.
Aug 08, 2021
I love how much you spaced this out through your writing, I will be reading more of your stories. :D
Aug 06, 2021
To:sajihon
ty so much for the feed back i will try my best
Aug 01, 2021
To:Swanny
ty bro😀 but my writing skills need work
Jul 31, 2021
Bro nice story I wish I could make a really good cover like yours