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IceDonut

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Writing since 2016 to find the fine line between the bittersweet beauty of sorrow and the feeling of deep human connection, creating worlds that provide shelter from reality, but also embrace its way of being.
I occasionally write comments/critiques that could be short stories on their own, so sorry for all the flooded comment sections 😅
Read into my current novel "Celluloid", if you are interested!

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Aug 28, 2023

To:NightWriter

But the story is not completely finished. Akimi just jumped up in the middle of the show because she felt embarrassed. But instead of letting her escape (like last time), he now clasped her by the hand, so she has to face it together with him!
Thanks for reading! 😊❤️

Celluloid: The Magic beneath us

Chapter:21

Aug 28, 2023

To:Katsuhito

All in JUST THREE DAYS? 😂
Wow, now I'm even more envious 😂🫣 Even if I wanted to write so fast, I couldn't! 😅 So big Kudos to that, even though I understand that your brain went on full burnout after that ... 😶‍🌫️

Love, Manga & Blackmail: A Secret Otaku's Countdown To Romance!

Chapter:40

Aug 27, 2023

To:NightWriter

You don't have to be sorry! Your life goes first and I'm really happy, the things holding you back allowed you to catch up again!
I'm also happy you liked that kiss! I though it could make a memorable and somehow iconic moment to have them kiss in a entirely dark room! (Yes, also with tongue 😜).
And you also seem to like the other characters, like her parents, which is really great! 😊
I'll happily provide you with the next chapter (just absolutely no pressure with reading! 🙂). Thanks for reading! 😊❤️❤️
P. S. I'll gladly provide you the dopamine kick! 😜

Celluloid: The Magic beneath us

Chapter:20

Aug 27, 2023

To:Koyomi

No worries ... he won't give up so easily 😉 ... But I'll also make sure to make things stay realistic ... hopefully! 😅
Thanks for reading! 😊❤️

Celluloid: The Magic beneath us

Chapter:20

Aug 27, 2023

Oh, that's actually a really clever idea! Haruhi could become a chef! He had been passionate (and skilled) about cooking all the time. Contrary to Chihiro he is not just a self-proclaimed hotshot, but ALSO know how to actually deliver on other terms!
Chihiro doesn't seem to want raising his popularity. I assume there will soon be a clash of cultures about a few topics ... 🤔😅

And Ichika is fraternizing with the enemy (Sumi)! 😱
No, I'm actually happy how they get along with each other! I think they could even somehow become friends. I mean Haruhi wouldn't have liked both of them if they wouldn't suit each other as well ... like my friend's friend is my friend as well 😊
Or polyamory could also be a solution 🤔😂
No, I just hope Sumi gets happy as well! 😊❤️

Thanks for writing! 😊❤️

P. S. Two chapters per day? You pick up even more pace and you wrote all those chapters in advance from the ritual at the beach onward? 😅🫣🙈 *Slight envy 😂*

Love, Manga & Blackmail: A Secret Otaku's Countdown To Romance!

Chapter:40

Aug 27, 2023

I think Riku's comment is actually a great testament to the fact, that at least parts of the group start enjoying the presence of "nerds" in their middle. In the end they are just normal people like them.
But I have to admit, that I'm not entirely sure if Chihiro will take part in this journey ... so either he will be convinced as well someday, or their group will merge into one, as one of the "normies" leaves them ... guess, we'll see 🤔

And what we'll also see is if they manage to run this place on their own ... guess another reward will be necessary. Let's see, what it is this time! 🤭
This way or another, I'm certain Souma Yukihira would be proud! 😜

Love, Manga & Blackmail: A Secret Otaku's Countdown To Romance!

Chapter:39

Aug 27, 2023

Guess Ichika and Chihiro won't get friends anymore. Even though she doesn't want to do anything, her subconscious just tries hurting him in any way imaginable 😂
And how Haruhi secretly roots for her hitting him, because Chihiro tried hitting on her 😂 So much neither of them really cares about loosing the game. But let's be honest: Getting a pool ball in the face can probably do bigger damage. Those things are heavy and hard 😅
But we even know Kirara's older sister! The green hair gave it away instantly. She seems to be a nice woman, though! And this way Haruhi's beating also had a good side 😅
Great chapter! I'm thrilled for the next one! Thanks for writing! 😊❤️

Love, Manga & Blackmail: A Secret Otaku's Countdown To Romance!

Chapter:38

Aug 27, 2023

Not so simple for Ryota I think ... 😅
Let's cross the fingers he won't be a stuttering mess, in the next moment, but instead let the wholesomeness pursue! 😶‍🌫️

The Whimsical Matchmaking Brigade

Chapter:28

Aug 27, 2023

If Hashiba was enjoying the beating … he was probably involved in all this. My money's on that he wanted to impress Izumi to a point where he wants to impress her and show how important she is to him. A love confession +1 😅

And now I wonder what important thing Yuki wanted to say … 🤔
Or just the thing she later on said anyways to make Mai and Ryota blush? Hmmm … I still remain with my opinion: Yuki x Sato is the dream couple. No one will be able to out-crazy them 😂

The Whimsical Matchmaking Brigade

Chapter:27

Aug 27, 2023

To:minatika

Confound indeed 😂

Haha, a few of my theories got quite close. I skimmed through the chapters already. I think that I predicted Claire being the real love interest in the third chapter already was more luck than skill though ... since I had a similar idea written down somewhere, where the helping witch turned into the real love interest. The bigger theory dump when Toren was introduced hit a few more nails and even predicted Claires trial in front of the Void Champions (I called them order of the multiverse back then 😂), who haven't even been really introduced at that point. The part about how Claire and Jun were connected was further off (still similar enough to call it a partly success, I think), but I think all in all it was a satisfying yield! 😊
And yes, I hope I didn't make you too nervous with my predictions. 😅
I think it's fun to try predict things and also shows that your story follows an intuitive plot structure and combines tropes of the Isekai Genre in a very compelling way! But more about that in my résumé at the end. I'll see when I come around to writing that, since I'm also in the last chapters of my story, but you'll definitely receive it soon 😉

And let's hope Claire will be able to hold him back ... not that Jun accidentally destroys a few worlds 😂

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:39

Aug 26, 2023

To:Deleted User

The last thing he will be doing is letting her down! They will find a solution and maybe it will even be more simple than they might think right now 😉🤭
Thanks for reading! 😊❤️

Celluloid: The Magic beneath us

Chapter:20

Aug 26, 2023

To:Katsuhito

The wholesomeness streak doesn't break. We should have a x10 multiplier activated already 🤭
But there will be a solution ... even without the money ... let's just see, will we? 😉
Everything has to do with a movie! 🤯
Don't know if this difference of your feeling comes from the pacing, but this chapter actually has 1,290 words, so a bit more than < 1k 😅 But I guess that stretching does not necessarily have to be something bad. I just have to work more time-efficient, because I'm not as fast with writing as you or others 😂😅
Thanks for reading! 😊❤️

Celluloid: The Magic beneath us

Chapter:20

Aug 26, 2023

To:Katsuhito

Sounds like Bug-Using to me 🤭
And yes, while we did not see it completely, she seems to have changed her whole attitude and that shines through, somehow. She is now less of that impulsive Tsundere but feels more mature! 😊

Love, Manga & Blackmail: A Secret Otaku's Countdown To Romance!

Chapter:37

Aug 25, 2023

Now they had a few really cute moments there, while Ichika patched him back together. She even hugged him and gave him a kiss to the forehead with a magic healing spell. I felt the pain getting better instantly 🙂
And she really seems to have grown as a character during that time ... at least she seems much more mature to me now. So maybe it is time for Haruhi as well ... to grow and tell his friends about what he has been hiding for so long. No matter, if they will leave him or despise him, if they do, they had never been his real friends altogether! 😉
And what a great opportunity now, that everyone is together! So go, Haruhi! You can do this! I'm believing in you! 😊

Love, Manga & Blackmail: A Secret Otaku's Countdown To Romance!

Chapter:37

Aug 25, 2023

So Ichika came clean with her friends! That's a great step in the right direction and if we're honest, both Kota and Kirara already suspected something like this. Maybe this is a good opportunity to start over with what actually kept them enjoy each other's presence 🙂
But ... Haruhi! That does not include beating up / getting beat up by some delinquents! It's definitely molestation what they did, but that does not mean you have to get in the line of fire! I mean Denji would be proud, but ... 🙈
Nonetheless, I think Ichika really appreciates this courage, she should hit you again because of your stupidity! Lucky, she's an aspiring doctor ... 🫣

Love, Manga & Blackmail: A Secret Otaku's Countdown To Romance!

Chapter:36