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Certified weeb who dreams of being an author. Wagering man. Will gush at Fate given any chance possible.

registered at: Oct 10, 2021

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Jul 20, 2022

I’ll be honest, this chapter is a bit… rough to read. There are lot of grammatical mistakes, from incorrect tenses to weird quotes placement. The overdescriptiveness in your prose makes the story hard to follow. Odd word choices killed off the mood for some scenes (I keep seeing the word “bunch” popping up, and I frankly can’t feel that the situation is supposed to be serious after that). The dialogue is bewildering so to speak, in the sense that the characters say a lot of words but I don’t see any personality coming from them. All in all, there is a lot of work to do with this one.

Chapter:1

Jul 20, 2022

Emma best girl, change my mind

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:10

Jul 20, 2022

“It’s not like I’m interested in this or anything” and the other lies Sam tells herself

Of Friends and Foam Cores

Chapter:17

Jul 19, 2022

To:kazesenken

Fair point. Let's just say don't worry about it too much 😅

Red-Black Course

Chapter:15

Jul 19, 2022

he protecc, he attacc, but most importantly he makes villains respecc wamen bacc

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:7

Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

It’s a pretty easy mistake tbh, but yeah

Red-Black Course

Chapter:14

Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

I’ll leave the answer to the next chapter ;)

Red-Black Course

Chapter:18

Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

Well the last game might be a surprise for you then ;)

Red-Black Course

Chapter:18

Jul 19, 2022

To:kazesenken

Idk man I stole (read: borrowed) the idea from Dr.Stone (swimming with clothes is allegedly the closest to simulating zero gravity in there)

Red-Black Course

Chapter:15

Jul 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

Standing there, they realized
That they're just like each other, trying to make history
And in the end it had to be this way

Red-Black Course

Chapter:18

Jul 19, 2022

I anger, therefore I am

Everything is Not Daijobu

Chapter:5

Jul 19, 2022

The necc to defeat welcome to the ballroom

Everything is Not Daijobu

Chapter:4

Jul 19, 2022

"yeah fuck that guy in particular"

- me to the mirror in front of me -

Everything is Not Daijobu

Chapter:2

Jul 19, 2022

I’m a simple man, I see tsundere I click like

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:34

Jul 18, 2022

To:Makech

"I have come to save you. Please do not resist"

- Cupid, probably -

Cupid's BLAME!

Chapter:9

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