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The webnovel author who decided he was going to write "fun".

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aaa

Aug 16, 2022

What ALTaccounti said.

MILF harem? 10/10 read who said you were the worst writer anyway?

Good Luck in the Golden Classroom: The Golden Waltz

Chapter:9

Aug 16, 2022

Ngl, kinda felt like a stupid move for Amahiko to tattle tale on others if his goal is to befriend everyone. He's just making more enemies.

Yelling at the teacher was a pretty chad move though.

Also, the teacher annoys me so much. His personality just goes from lazy to strict, two of the worst qualities in a teacher. Not to mention, he's also unreasonable and stupid.

I was thinking he was like the cool laid-back lazy uncle who just lets students do whatever they want, but unfortunately that's not the case.

Good Luck in the Golden Classroom: The Golden Waltz

Chapter:8

Aug 16, 2022

MOMMY FIGURE? Ok I was wrong, I will now imagine a hot mature mommy maid.

Good Luck in the Golden Classroom: The Golden Waltz

Chapter:7

Aug 16, 2022

Mans speaking in Shakespeare language

I feel like it would be great if you added some descriptions to the characters. If they're important to the story, then it's best that we know what they look like in some way. An example would be the president and the guy who offered him lunch. We don't even know what the main character looks like.

Then again, it's all a matter of preference ig.

Good Luck in the Golden Classroom: The Golden Waltz

Chapter:6

Aug 16, 2022

To:Deleted User

Let's see what happens with the new and improved Dustin.......

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:29

Aug 16, 2022

To:WALKER

Wish I could take my time developing all the exes in general with slower pacing, but I think I would end up going beyond 75k words.

Glad you're liking Lucio as a character.

Gentleman of the Apocalypse

Chapter:29

Aug 16, 2022

This school is like heaven on earth! That rooftop was just nuts!

To be friends with everyone, huh? Sounds like a beautiful ideal. Wonder how that's going to work.

Very important question, when you mentioned football field, are you talking about the American one or soccer?

Good Luck in the Golden Classroom: The Golden Waltz

Chapter:5

Aug 16, 2022

I will imagine a cute young maid. You can't change my mind. The school seems like the best place to be, but Reona's line about the rooftop being the only enjoyable thing is rather alarming. But honestly, there's a lot of good stuff about the school so I'm not sure how everything is going to change from there.

Good Luck in the Golden Classroom: The Golden Waltz

Chapter:4

Aug 16, 2022

Don't live that boring school life again, Amahiko!

Good Luck in the Golden Classroom: The Golden Waltz

Chapter:3

Aug 16, 2022

"Congrats, you're in Class R now" I think this was supposed to be Class G

Anyways, it sounds really frustrating. Imagine working hard for years and sacrificing a huge portion of your youth just to realize that the ideal you were chasing after was merely an illusion. Wonder how Amahiko is going to cope with this.

Makes me question if working hard is really the best way to live life.

Good Luck in the Golden Classroom: The Golden Waltz

Chapter:2

Aug 16, 2022

Should have went with Class Black for the special Principal's class 😎

Good Luck in the Golden Classroom: The Golden Waltz

Chapter:1

Aug 15, 2022

This was such a fun ending ngl. We're given a massive treat of two lovely girls dancing on the stage. Pink and Purple!

I'd say the best thing about this novel would be its characters. From the beginning of the chapter, I would say it's really easy to be charmed by Amy's personality and ambitions to be an idol. While trying to pursue her dreams, she also has a set amount of missions that she as to do. And every time she's doing her job, she's also finding away to show herself off in the most flamboyant way possible. That way, you don't get that usual feel of the plot just being "We have to do this mission." and it is more like "Let's do this mission with style!" I won't say much about the other characters, because I want to emphasize on Amy in particular. Lily was an amazing contrasting compliment for Amy though.

The plot also makes you ask a lot of questions, which really adds to the mystery detective vibe of things. Curiosity makes you continue to read the next chapters as you try to figure out what the hell is going on.

That's pretty much all for my mansplaining. Congrats on finishing the novel!

Idolatry

Chapter:28

Aug 15, 2022

Woaaaaaah the title! She said the title!

I wonder if Lily's going to hold on to her sense of justice though....I guess she's learning to compromise to certain things.

Maybe it's because she realized that her ideal of justice isn't as perfect as it seems to be. In the end she chose her friendship over her egotistical pursuit for justice. Can't say which option would be better in a moral standpoint, but perhaps it's just a perspective of things.

Just like what Amy said, concepts are relative. We must stay open-minded, so we can see the many different options this world has to provide.

Idolatry

Chapter:27

Aug 15, 2022

Not sure why, but I found it funny that Lily's all tied up in Amy's room after what felt like an "all's well that ends well" resolution

Idolatry

Chapter:26

Aug 15, 2022

So basically, Mr. Sugar Daddy nuked his own building.

Idolatry

Chapter:25

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