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lolitroy

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P.S: I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't.

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Aug 13, 2026

what is it with u and cunty butlers

Re:Incarnation • The Hundred Faces of Razzel Od Mithril

Chapter:4

Aug 13, 2026

I was the 1000th view

Re:Incarnation • The Hundred Faces of Razzel Od Mithril

Chapter:4

Aug 13, 2026

To:Mara

oh yea this one is gonna brush the maximum... I was a bit wary and still am but we ball

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:14

Aug 13, 2026

To:Mara

I wonder too... out of curiosity, what DID you expect

The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:14

Aug 13, 2026

I think the writing was notably better this chapter (again, might be preference lolol). I was a bit confused as to how/why he could know about Silvi since the chapter seemed to be from his POV so my guess is either head hopping or it was omniscient POV instead? idk, looking forward to her wiping the floor with him

Witch’s First Espionage Mission in 200 Years

Chapter:6

Aug 13, 2026

To:Soulwriter861

how is he gonna rizz her then...

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:16

Aug 13, 2026

other things are burning
also sayane getting isekaid³

Until The Heavens Burn

Chapter:1

Aug 12, 2026

that's probably the longest prufuck comment I've seen and somehow it's so fitting given the context

A Crown of Filial Sin

Chapter:3

Aug 12, 2026

To:Moon

u just want me to write porn

A Crown of Filial Sin

Chapter:2

Aug 12, 2026

HAHAHAHAHA (my god of lust is also a furry... holy shit hf is truly a hivemind)

A Crown of Filial Sin

Chapter:2

Aug 12, 2026

something else was also erect

A Crown of Filial Sin

Chapter:1

Aug 12, 2026

The origin story is cute but I feel like another cue other than "he remembered" would help ground the scene a bit better. In general i feel like the lack of transitions makes the story disorienting so there's several passages I had to reread to know how tf they got from point A to B, though the constant 2-3 word dentence fragment paragraphs don't help, but the latter is just a stylistic choice I'm not fond of rather than feedback per se

Witch’s First Espionage Mission in 200 Years

Chapter:5

Aug 12, 2026

why is every sentence a paragraph and why is everything double spaced

Witch’s First Espionage Mission in 200 Years

Chapter:4

Aug 12, 2026

so nona is the target audience for the seashorse merman romances amazon keeps threatening me with...

I wonder if the merman will show up again D: tbh I was half expecting one to join them, but then again they'd have to carry him around unless it was like monster musume where the mermaid uses a wheelchair out of water

The Dawn of the Wish Bearer

Chapter:16

Aug 12, 2026

me when my endearing flaw is a disability...

I Want to Be the Strongest Mage, But I Can't Read My Grimoire Because of My Dyslexia!

Chapter:2

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