Jun 18, 2023
To:Geta
Thank you, I will group both replies in a single comment. Yeah, I still remember that first and foremost, this is a romance story coated in sport (or at least, for the first-year arc of the competition). And to be honest, their romance is just to begin. However, I think that both of them should also have their own struggle, not just the girl, and make MC look great. In here, you see how Keith is struggling, and breaking out of it because he remembers her. Later on, you will see her problem.
Reminder/readback: something about chapter 4.
And yeah, my English is not the best and I'm rewriting things over and over. I hope it keeps getting better to the point that it satisfies the readers. Again, thanks for the feedback!
