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A passionate game enthusiast who like to design game concepts, and story-writing at the same time. Loves writing engaging stories or serious, slow and interconnecting stories. For hire.
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Jun 15, 2023
Nice diary. It really hits me back. Keep it up!
She drinks Gatorade? Holy crap, WNBA want to know her number.
To:Peace Sign
Thank you, I glad you enjoyed it!🙂
Ayyy, no more wall of text. Jk. Anyway, it's pretty nicely written and detailed, but the ending could get some punch for the reader to get interested on the next. It's pretty much well done otherwise.
Keep it up👍
Yep, he is a chill, cool guy. 😎 I hope you enjoy the following chapters 🙂
Thank you so much! 👍 And yes, it kept getting better as this goes.
First two chapters is the most boring ones here, so if this already enticed you, then expect better contents to come.😎
Another full screen paragraph. In BOLD.
Boom!
Opening in the phone, first paragraph: entire screen.
Ok I'm dying.🤣
Jun 14, 2023
To:lolitroy
Haha, he is too basketball maniac. He didn't know our struggle as 5'xx" Anyway, Iverson is also considered short at 6'0 I think? He was considered one of the shortest players in NBA, but he excels at it.
I think MC is comparing to NBA standard too much 😆
A little spoiler: chapter 10. Reminder: They had each other messenger, in this case, LINE. They could talk anytime they want, but I don't think they are close enough to set up some spicy moment or public dates in their first day... Look toward to it.👍
We are all but a droplet in the sea, trying to survive each day.😭
Yeah. I just researched and these is usual height for NBA Draft players, or at least at their final university years. A center would be very tall, ranging from 6'8" to 7'2". They average in 7' so yeah, I think this is quite accurate.😆
Lol
Thanks for the feedback. I will edit the earlier chapter I guess. I have some problems taking off early in the chapters, going to edit them as I get to it. Thanks!👍
Slicky smooth of a butter 😍
