Jul 06, 2023

The time important question: ...is this attraction safe, or out?? 😭 Virginia is definitely out my boy. Let that one go.

But now the raid is starting to take shape! Wonder what the girls are planning~

The...the STD man 🫡 I can't. I cannot take these names. Helllpppp. And the way this VS transmits alcohol and *other sensations* 😭 I'm amazed the cops haven't gotten involved sooner. Jason's documentary keeps making more and more sense, but I feel like if he actually publishes it this whole game might get a big Cease and Desist.

...oh 😮 the Black Hat is here!!! OH!

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Jul 06, 2023

The dreaded game breaking server economy inflation 😭 where gold means nothing, and you have to convert your 99,999,999g into Chickens or some other random object that actually has trade worth. The collateral trade hell.

Temple Casino? Temple Casino 😤 I want to go there so bad. Dragon Quest XI gave me a taste for really good (slime themed) slot machines 🎰 video game casinos are top tier.

Aaaand the Lady of Fanservice is here? Miss Virginia?? 🤣🤣🤣 Oh that name. Your naming game is so good.

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Jul 06, 2023

They turned Windburg II into a walking simulator where you HAVE to experience the city at the slowest possible speed to progress 😭 I love these trolls who built this mess. They are so evil and I wish I had a sliver of that evil wit omg

Assassingh 🤣🤣🤣 frick. Every name. I always think I'm ready for it. And then I'm not. Welp that's coffee spilled on my desk from laughing. I regret nothing.

🤦 Beastman tried to actually hack [sigh] he should have known better. I love that the anti-hack is practically a sentient Eldritch electronic horror god. But it's interested in...Alice? 🤔

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Jul 06, 2023

The dreaded class picking decision 😨 would you laugh if I told you I've actually dropped games at the Player Creation stage because I couldn't pick a class? My min-max anxiety can get so strong. RIP Dragon's Dogma 😭 I tried so hard to play, but spent most of my time debating classes instead...

Please tell me Red Sus Imposter from Mongus is here. Please. Please 🙏😭 HE JUST POINTS 👉 Bahahahaaa help. He's the worst NPC!!! and of course they had to keep the sussy baka alive. Horny crusade killed everyone but him

Windburg II: VRChat Boogaloo.

Honestly Alice? That decapitation was called for 😤 a gorgeous throw, perfect arc in the air. 10/10. Get her a spot in the decapitation Olympics.

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Jul 06, 2023

Okay. I'm back. I've got coffee. I'm ready to send you encouragement and all the silly comments 🫡

Jason searching VS accidents strikes me as just...so realistic. Like, yeah if I saw something like that in front of me, holy crap would I be googling like mad to try to find out what happened!!

I'm also really happy to hear Peter Null is okay and thriving. Well, idk how much "thriving" if this is a post-apoca world outside 🤣 but I dunno. I feel like most writers would have had the brother succumb to the allergy accident for Maximum Trauma on Jason, and I'm glad you took it a different direction.

Seeing Alice there, daitily showing off her proof-of-murder crystal 🤩 like a proud cat showing off the dead lizard she caught for you!! ...wait that's not as cute of a comparison as I hoped. Either way. I'm so glad to see she's okay!!

This smell sense is actually a really cool idea and now I'm mystified and intrigued 🧐

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Jul 06, 2023

The feels 😭 sad mom and son scenes will always make my heart hurt for them. <333

He's working so hard to escape the grief <3 awe Fumi...

And then. The graveyard. The summoner!! Oh honestly I hope Fumihito gets to be a surgeon that can also raise the dead with necromancy!! Or at least get involved in some crazy necromancy hijinks 💕

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Jul 06, 2023

Ooooh I like this new direction!! I liked the original story too, but I can see where you're going here! Instead of Fumihito lacking motivation, he's just continuing rigidily on the path to become a doctor, still burdened with the grief of his father not being able to save his mother... 😭

I'm curious to see where you'll go with this! It takes a lot of courage to go for a rewrite, so I'm sending you encouragement and support 💕

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Jul 06, 2023

To:IceDonut

Honestly, we could use more Madame Claires in the world 😤 they would make internet ads so much nicer. (Blessed be AdBlock though, let's be honest.)

Oooh you're not to far from one of my possible ending ideas!! I have a general idea of the direction for this story, but I am still deciding on an ending because there are multiple directions I could see this going (depending on how the characters interact.) I wanted to see which characters had the most natural chemistry when I wrote them, and let that dictate the ending. Certainly, a Claire ending is possible 😏

But there is the one little catch: why is Claire helping Jun? That is a mystery that will slowly get answered over the course of the story~!! 💕

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Jul 06, 2023

To:IceDonut

Jun immediately runs off and does exactly what got him in trouble last time 🤦‍♂️ oh my poor main character. He literally proposed to a girl he's never met! Ahhh 😱 It's time for Claire to step in and stop this from getting any worse! Details about the isekai to follow in the next few chapters~ (and Jun will calm down a bit, I swear 🤣)

(Fun fact! The "insanity" quote is actually misattributed to Einstein 😆 There's no source for it in Einstein's writing, and the only real recorded description of it is in a 1983 fiction novel “Sudden Death” by American-author Rita Mae Brown. There's some debate around this of course, so I encourage you to check it out yourself online and see what you think!)

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Jul 06, 2023

To:IceDonut

So excited to have you here!! :D I also see that you recently uploaded your contest entry onto HoneyFeed (I see that 12-hour cover you made!!! It is beautiful ❤️ The shading of the leaves? Gorgeous!! I will jump into reading soon!)
You mention a lot of points that are definitely going to come back in this story! (Jun missing his girlfriend's point // Having to learn to be less superficial // His girlfriend bottling things up and not really saying her feelings.) These are some undertones that will come back and be explored!! But there will also be some absolute silliness in here too 😆 I'm trying to blend these heavier ideas with a comedy plot. It's a fine line between laughter and drama 💕 and I hope to capture both! Stick with me, I promise this is a story that will surprise you <3

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Jul 06, 2023

A bit of info into this rebellion, I'm glad the greymoors were pretty well prepared for it. Also glad Diane is on their side rather than against them (unlike her husband 🤣 whoops)

Kyle is almost there! Just a little bit longer~ I'm hoping Diane can bring Viv into the bracelet with her at some point, to be like "And here's the guy that's been watching you for the last few weeks. But don't worry, Viv. There's a censor filter."

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Jul 06, 2023

Andrea is making great progress...for Andrea!! 🤣 But not enough for the exams! Oh no! Cheating is always a possibility, but hmm 🤔 it requires its own special skill set. I wonder if Andrea can learn it in time?

I love all the old school cheating methods 🤣 tried and true: hide stuff on yourself, your bag, anywhere you can!

I'm glad he's starting to change his perspective!! Slowly but surely 💕 now they just need to survive this test!

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Jul 06, 2023

To:seanyori

Ooooh so this is a big rehaul!! Well I will miss some of these characters (pls tell me shinji stays? 🥺) But I am looking forward to seeing Akari become the ikemen he always wanted to be ❤️ (I am sad there are no ikemen emojis. I need sparkly shojo eyes!! 🤣)

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Jul 06, 2023

To:Katsuhito

The plural of fruit is...fruits?? I think? 🤔 Man now I'm second guessing my English. Moose. Meese.
We will get new evidence next chapter, Detective-san!! 🕵️‍♀️🫡 And it might change the look of things! (Though really I'm not too good at writing mysteries 🤣 so as usual this will be a bit more character-drama slanted!)

Mia: [exists]
Toren: 🗿 < ( ˢᵠᵘᵉᵃᵏ ).

Thank you for reading 🤩 seriously your replies always make me grin.

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Jul 06, 2023

I'm glad Kaiden has other romance experience outside this one! I'm always happy to see MCs that have been on a few dates before 😁 but, well, being in love with a vtuber is rough 🤣

Ahahaa Kaiden getting that question right is amazing! I love the twist you put on the usual "sleepyhead has to answer a question on the board" scene!

On one hand: meet vtuber of your dreams
On the other: become a doxxer 😂 whoops. I wonder how this will go?

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