Jun 20, 2023

Its so nice to see Takashi and Nao both having some positive change already! 💕 So cute!! 🥺

And that little encouragement at half time, and the cheering! 📣 nao is trying her absolute best, and Takashi is too <3

I'm so glad you showed Takashi struggling in the game, and fighting to get that goal. Sports aren't kind enough to let you win just because you've got encouragement 😭 they can be brutal, and the other team has cheerleaders too! But I'm glad Takashi eventually scored a goal, it felt really natural and so fulfilling!

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Jun 20, 2023

To:Koyomi

Ahh okay!! I went back and reread, you're totally right. this is what I get for reading stories right as they update instead of binge-reading 🤣 but I want to keep up with the stories while they come out! Ty!!

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Jun 19, 2023

Elias goes right in for the punch!!!
ヽ(°〇°)ﾉ woah!!!
And grandma is here to deliver the smack of punishment 😭 it strings, but I think it was necessary.

I think the teacher Tsuda is taking this really rationally, all things considered, and I'm interested to hear his proposition!

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Jun 19, 2023

Ryota in the nurse's office?! 😭 I was so worried I missed a chapter, but it seems he just spent a bit too much time in the rain! At least he got a chance to see Mai being cute 💕 some upsides to getting a fever 😏
The mystery of the club budget thickens...

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Jun 19, 2023

Kyo tried so hard to make his hair look good 😭 but with all that hair spray, I'm definitely imagining something super pointing and stuck in the air, Yu-Gi-Oh style! Though if the girls seemed to like it, it must look pretty good on him 💕

Ichigo-chan!! 🍓 Standing up for him >w< so cute! I absolutely want them to keep sharing books together.

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Jun 19, 2023

He was so prepared to be reincarnated as a noble woman...only to become her stat screen 🤣 help. I love it. I want more of this absolutely absurd concept!!

Also, as an aside, I immediately like Stefan for standing up for Viv ❤️

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Jun 19, 2023

To:Kaisei

I enjoy playing with tropes 🤣 hopefully trying to be a bit unexpected, while still keeping things familiar enough to easily follow along! I will admit to taking a slightly different direction on elves, where humans still objectively like them, but the elves are so rare it's sort of like suddenly finding an unexpected piece of jewelry in your house 😭 it's pretty, sure, but ahh who left that there?! Still, thank you for checking out my story! ☺️ I hope to see you around!!

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Jun 18, 2023

Onsen episode!! Complete with censoring clouds...but only for Grace 🤣 oh no! I mean, that totally makes sense, since it's his own dream, he'd probably know how he himself would look, whereas he'd imagine a girl with the censorship clouds. Grace was not prepared 😭 Still! It gave me a really good laugh, what a fun chapter!

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Jun 18, 2023

Oh woah! He eloped with someone in his past life!! (Maybe!) The drama thickens >:)

And then waking up to Lucia 🤣 just casually next to a battle princess. Yep.

I actually really like the prayer magic system though! That's so interesting and gives plenty of room for lore in addition to exploring spells! (If it's real, that is 😆)

But I'm starting to understand his form now! How he can shift himself and his physical shape. I feel like there's a lot you could do with shape-shifting-like magic like that!

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Jun 18, 2023

To:kazesenken

Hopefully not too ominous 😆 I didn't want to make things scary, so I did consider leaving that last line out if it was too dark. May still revise later if it doesn't end up fitting the overall vibe.

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Jun 18, 2023

To:kazesenken

I do intend to address that bit of world building in the next section, actually! (At least give a little more reason why they praise elves so much.) But I haven't quite delved into Roki having any magic yet x) I might give him something small!

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Jun 18, 2023

To:kazesenken

He's... basically the village idiot 😭 yep, I will not deny that!
Yes!! I do plan on making him see the two as separate people, because that's an important part of the story.

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Jun 18, 2023

A bandit attack is upcoming, but we don't know where or when! >:) Maybe our main boy can help out? But if he changes events here...that'll start derailing the game, and also maybe put Elise closer to the prince again? ;) Which might be some fun aspects to explore!!

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Jun 18, 2023

I wasn't expecting him to ultra poison himself right away!! 🤣 I totally thought he was just gonna have an easy time grinding, but I like the change of pace

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Jun 18, 2023

I'm definitely reminded of "Trapped in a Dating Sim" as well as "Reborn as a Villainess" -- Admittedly, I'm a stupidly huge fan of the genre 🤣 so I'm looking forward to seeing your own spin on this!

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