Nov 10, 2023
The switch to Amber’s POV was really a nice touch, allowing Mitsu’s words to be fully private – even from us, the readers. That moment is for Mitsu and Sakura alone.
But now, finally, Mitsu can face his unfulfilled grief. He can face it, and grieve all he needs, so he can let go of the guilt and love that’s been eating away at him all this time. He can finally let Sakura know how much he loves her.
And Amber, watching on, can mirror that grief in her own loss of her last boyfriend, when she thought her dream of being a Royal Beekeeper was over. But now she has a second chance, and I think Mitsu does too 
This was a very sweet ending: cathartic and yet opening the door for a new start for both of them. Even though parts of the romance felt rushed in the middle, I think this ending hit just right, and it leaves them open to get to deepen their relationship as they prepare for their marriage. They’re both in their 30s, and they’ve both loved before. I think it’s believable that they’d have a relationship while aiming for marriage soon, since they’re both adults that know what they want in a relationship and can enter a marriage with proper expectations.
Congratulations on completing this story, and writing it through to the end! I think you’ve created something unique and beautiful, short and sweet, with the concept of allowing people to grieve from their losses and love again!! 👏 👏
I have some feedback points I could offer, but I only like to give these if an author is interested 👍 you may already know what you'd like to work on or improve about this piece, and I prefer to encourage authors rather than critique! So I'll only provide if you ask for it x)
Thank you for writing this story and sharing it with us!!! ✨🎊 And congratulations on making it to the top 10!!!!! 
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but I'm not sure if that's too much all at once though!! I hope it wasn't too much to read! c: