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Mario Nakano 64

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May 18, 2026

To:Katsuhito

This is her trial. If she truly is worth all the hype, she will pass with flying colors, and so far, that's exactly what she's doing.

En Passant Grandmaster Volume 1

Chapter:27

May 18, 2026

And that's the end. As for my review, prepare yourself. When I saw the title, I assumed this was going to be a typical phantom thief flic. It wasn't. Now in all fairness, some of that is on me, but as I read more and more, it really became apparent that dubbing Melody a phantom thief might've been a misstep. She really does feel more like a bounty hunter. I honestly felt like the phantom thief bits were more gimmick than plot relevant, as her being a bounty hunter just fits much better. I also think that maybe you should have set the tone better during the story's first half, as it really is night and day between the two parts of the story. All in all, I'd say this whole thing is a 3/5. I feel if Melody was a bounty hunter and the tone was set better earlier in the story, I would've enjoyed it more.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:21

May 18, 2026

I know I was joking about it in the previous chapter, but this magic duel along with Melody's act really make her feel less like a phantom thief, more like a bounty hunter.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:20

May 18, 2026

Yeah, this proves Melody isn't a real phantom thief, otherwise, she would've seen it coming... I will see myself out like a phantom thief escaping a palace.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:19

May 18, 2026

Is that just a bruise, or is Geato beginning to rot too?

Demon Hunters Academy

Chapter:12

May 18, 2026

The race was creative, but now I'm starting to view Melody as less of a phantom thief, more of a bounty hunter.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:18

May 18, 2026

This chapter was funded in part by Caelith.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:17

May 18, 2026

I'm kind of more interested to see what's going on with the prime minister.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:16

May 18, 2026

Things just got real intense.

Demon Hunters Academy

Chapter:11

May 18, 2026

You know, I feel like Melody is more like a bounty hunter than phantom thief. Might just be due to the tonal shift.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:15

May 18, 2026

Honestly, kind of mixed on the tonal shift.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:14

May 18, 2026

Hoping Melody isn't cooked to the point where Kenta becomes the main MC.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:13

May 18, 2026

To:Deleted User

Was just about to joke about that character being another ad for your novel.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:13

May 18, 2026

Both got caught in the sludge and would have stayed there if a bodybuilder wasn't there.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:12

May 18, 2026

Whelp, there goes the illusion of the quotes being mistaken for being real ones with the "just now" line.

Melody: The Phantom Thief

Chapter:11

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