Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Jun 18, 2024

    Author's Commentary #68:

    Time to talk about Chapter 68: A Brazilian samba dance.
    In the original, this was actually the 69th chapter. Here it's just one shy of the magic number, but don't worry, the remake has something even better planed for that chapter.

    Funnily enough, the whole idea for the samba dance came about because it was the 69th chapter. I wanted to do something fanservicy to celebrate and since the Rio Olympic were about to take place in the story, I decided to have all the female employees of Ryokoma dress up in skimpy samba outfits and attempt a samba dance. The dance itself was awkward, but at least the patrons, Helga, and Masaru enjoyed it.

    Now let's talk a bit about Tetsuka, who makes her debut here. She was originally created to be a main character in a spin-off novel, however, I decided to change plans an rewrite said novel. Thus, she'll ultimately have a different role from what I originally planned out for her, though that mainly extends to the Escape Witch remake since she won't make too many appearances in Spice of life.

    銀川 鉄花 (Ginkawa Tetsuka) is how her name is written in kanji. 鉄花 means "iron" and "flower".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is October 16th. I chose the date at random so there isn't any greater significance behind why I made this day her birthday.

    Her favorite food is metal. To add some more context, Tetsuka is actually a human-dragon hybrid. She was also inspired by Gajeel Redfox from Fairy Tail which is why I decided to have her eat metal. She does eat normal food though, but prefers meals that are high in iron and zinc. Her birth is what led to Harumi developing heterochromia. This led to her being ostracized by the Ginkawa family and eventually deciding to leave the family and explore the world on her own at age 10. She's Harumi's third daughter and the only older sister Madoka gets along with.

    One thing I'll clarify is that Tetsuka likes giving nicknames to everyone. Harumi is Ka-chan, Madoka is Doka, Koki and Eika are Ji and Ba respectively, and Emeri is Meri. I might end up having her make another appearance in this story, but it likely wouldn't be until the end of the series. She will however have a major role in Season 2 of the Escape Witch remake so if you're reading that, look forward to her appearance there.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Spice of life [Remake]
    Chapter:68



    Jun 17, 2024

    Author's Commentary #115:

    Time to talk about Chapter 115: Smothered mate.
    I was honestly debating whether to have this chapter take place after the next one, but ultimately decided to have this one occur first due to how stupid and cringe the Numakawa match was.

    Luckily, Utami won her match and did so by delivering a smothered mate to Maria. For those who don't know, a smothered mate occurs when you checkmate with just the knight. I definitely wanted to have a smothered mate in the series due to how satisfying it is to pull off. As for Maria, she's the only remaining member of the college girl group that hasn't got a bio yet so let's remedy that.

    マリア・ヴィクシュタウチュチー (Maria Wykształciuchy) is how her name is spelled in kanji. A fun fact is that all the college girls have surnames that are derivatives of "egghead" in other cultures.

    Her birthday is August 1st. I chose this date at random so there's no real significance behind why this date is her birthday, though it could be argued that since it is the first day of the month, it relates to Maria thinking she's the smartest in the world. Same for Mona and Abigail who have a birthday on the first day of the month.

    Her favorite piece is the queen, mainly because she views herself as a queen.

    At this point, the worst that could happen to the chess club is them drawing the team event and Yuusuke and Numakawa being subjected to the mini-punishments. If Numakawa wins, the group gets a free trip to London and can even skip the 12 hour flight. Of course, that's only if Numakawa can win.

    While I tend not to spoil future chapters, I'll do so here and reveal that the game in the next chapter will feature a Coca-Cola gambit. Yeah, it's going to be shit, and is already on my list for my top 5 least favorite games in the series.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:115

    Jun 17, 2024

    Author's Commentary #67:

    Time to talk about Chapter 67: An Olympic dinner celebration.
    This chapter's main purpose is to introduce the other members of the Ginkawa family, notably Emeri, Madoka's cousin. While Emeri is currently unaware that she is a Ginakwa by blood in this series, she is nonetheless close with Madoka as her family tends to vist hers frequently. As for why she doesn't know she's a Ginkawa, her mother Eika, who's Harumi's sister and Gozaemon's daughter, left the family in order to make a name for herself without the family's influence looming over her. Speaking of which, let's give the bios for all the new characters starting with Emeri.

    倉守 英芽里 (Kuramori Emeri) is how her name is spalled in kanji. 英芽里 means "excellence", "sprout", and "village" , but can also mean "beautiful" which Emeri certainly is. 倉守 means "warehouse" and "protect".

    Her birthday is July 25th. I chose this date at random so there's no greater significance behind why I chose this date to be her birthday.

    Her favorite food is unadon. Like Madoka and Yuni, she is one of the main characters of Escape Witch. Now only Serika has yet to appear in Spice of life, and I can guarantee she will.

    倉守 功気 (Kuramori Koki) is how Koki's name is spelled in kanji. 功気 means "achievement" and "energy" which is fitting considering he's a massive jock.

    His birthday is April 6th which was the day of the opening of the first modern Olympic games which was held in Athens, Greece in 1896.

    His favorite food is protein shakes. He actually used to have red hair but lasered all of it off in order to improve his times. Emeri got both her hair and eyes from him.

    倉守 栄華 (Kuramori Eika) is how Eika's name is spelled in kanji. 栄華 means "glory" and "flower".

    Her birthday is December 22nd. This date was partially chosen at random, though I made sure that her birthday was during Winter. Since this won't even be brought up properly in Spice of life, I'll reveal that Eika's original name was Akina and spelled as 秋奈 in kanji.
    秋奈 means "Fall" and "fruit tree". All the children of Gozaemon are named after seasons though ironically were each born in the season following the one they were named after. Since she's a Ginkawa by blood, her hair is naturally silver, however, she dyes it red.

    Like Koki, her favorite food is protein shakes.

    倉守 惠利砂 (Kuramori Eriza) is how Eriza's name is spelled in kanji. 惠利砂 means "kindness", "advantage", and "sand".

    Her birthday is July 5th which was the day of the opening ceremony of the 1924 Summer Olympics in Paris, France.

    Her favorite food is kale protein smoothies. Despite her young age, she's brimming with talent and got all her parent's athletic genes and then some. Her hair is naturally red like her sister, however, she bares the Ginkawa's trademark lapis lazuli colored eyes.

    As for the twins, 銀川 織美亜 (Ginkawa Oribia) and
    銀川 織世 (Ginkawa Orise) are how their names are written in kanji. 織世 means "weave" and "generation" while 織美亜 means "weave", "beautiful", and "second".

    Their birthday is April 4th. The reason I chose the date was because 2 squared is 4, and because 4 is considered an unlucky number in Japanese culture. This is fitting since the twins tend to embody the dark side of the Ginkawa family. Orise is the older one and therefore would have been the one to be the next head of the family had Harumi not decided to make Madoka her successor.

    Their favorite food is caviar.

    Finally, there's the current head of the Ginkawa family, primarily in title only, Gozaemon Ginkawa. He used to be much stricter, but has mellowed out in recent years.

    銀川 五左衛門 (Ginkawa Gozaemon) is how Gozaemon's name is written in kanji. 五左衛門 means "five", "left", "protect", and "door".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His birthday is May 5th. I chose this date for him mainly due to his affinity for the number 5. In fact, 5 is his lucky number.

    His favorite food is candied apples.

    While some characters like Gozaemon and the twins won't have many more appearances in the story, I at least wanted them to be prominently featured in at least one chapter.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Spice of life [Remake]
    Chapter:67


    Jun 16, 2024

    Author's Commentary #114:

    Time to talk about Chapter 114: Farm fresh fried liver.
    For those who don't know, the Fried liver attack is one of the first things new chess players learn. It's a good move for beginners, but naturally it's not as viable at higher levels of play.

    I definitely wanted to include at least one game featuring it though which is why I had Rodeo play it in this game. Rodeo's a beginner so the move was perfect for someone like him to use, not to mention his opponent was a rookie too. Speaking of which, here's Abby's bio. I'll also do Mona's bio too since her match occurred off-screen.

    アビゲイル・ボフィン (Abigail Boffin) is how her name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is June 1st. I chose this day at random so there's no real significance behind why this day is her birthday.

    Her favorite piece is the bishop because she thinks they're strong.

    モナ・アテル (Mona Atel) is how Mona's name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is March 1st. I chose this date at random so there's no real significance behind why this day is her birthday.

    Her favorite piece is the rook, mainly due to it's endgame value.

    The Zago and Azenira matches being off-screened was mainly due to my "if this gets a video game adaptation, this will happen in it" mentality. A cool thing I want to be in the game is that the opponent would change depending on who the player chose. For example, Zago would play Olga while Azenira would play Mona. Whenever I go into video game adaptation mentality, I tend to think up some intriguing ideas for the series. The most recent one being the way to implement a certain character from one of my other works into the story. I won't reveal who that is, but when they make they're debut, I'll be sure to talk about it then.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:114



    Jun 14, 2024

    Author's Commentary #64:

    Time to talk about Chapter 64: Postman Jester.
    Jester finally makes his proper debut in the remake, and gets to sing his themesong. He also tried to kill Madoka, but failed and was sent blasting off into the sky.

    Obviously, he's a comedic villain and embodies the spirit of Team Rocket from Pokemon. ジェスター is how his name would be spelled in Japanese, and speaking of which, I attempted to do a Japanese translation of his themesong.

    Fair warning, since I used Google translate, there's probably a bunch of errors, but here's the Japanese version of Jester's themesong.
    ヨヨイ! 俺は江戸の奥から来た最大の犯罪者です。俺は組織犯罪界の大物です。誰もが私の名を恐れています! 俺が成し遂げた残虐行為はすべて! 殺人! 誘拐!暴行! 麻薬密輸! 誰もできません 我が力に匹敵せよ! 盗難!戦争犯罪! さあ、皆、我が怒りを恐れよ!彼らはピエロは愚か者だと言います。さて、今誰が笑ってるの、バカ?ララララ。俺は悪で、卑劣で、邪悪で、非人道的で、暗黒忍術大名-おおおおおおおおおお。よおお!
    [Yoyoi! Ore wa Edo no oku kara kita saidai no hanzai-shadesu. Ore wa soshiki hanzai-kai no ōmonodesu. Daremoga watashi no na o osorete imasu! Ore ga nashitogeta zangyaku kōi wa subete! Satsujin! Yūkai! Bōkō! Mayaku mitsuyu! Dare mo dekimasen waga chikara ni hitteki seyo! Tōnan! Sensō hanzai! Sā, kai, waga ikari o osoreyo! Karera wa piero wa orokamonoda to iimasu. Sate, ima dare ga waratteru no, baka? Rararara Ore-sama wa aku de, hiretsude, jaaku de, hijindōteki de, ankoku ninjutsu daimyō ōo ō ōo ō. Yo ō]

    As for how his themesong actually sounds, it sounds similar to Master Kohgha's theme from The Legend of Zelda series. Speaking of which, Master Kohga was the biggest influence behind his character along with Don Kanoji from Bleach and Captain Buggy from One piece.

    His birthday is April 1st, which is also April Fool's Day. Iori from En Passant Grandmaster also shares this birthday with him, but the two have no relationship to each other whatsoever.

    His favorite food is bananas, which is also the favorite food of Master Kogha and the Yiga clan.

    Jester won't be a major antagonist in this series, but there's a good chance he'll pop up every now and again, especially if Madoka's around. Funnily enough in the original, Jester actually kidnapped Madoka for the first time, however, I decided to retcon it in the remake, mainly because I ended up rewriting both Jester's role in the story and the chapter where Madoka first got kidnapped. From here on out though, most Jester and Madoka chapters will be very similar to their original counterparts.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Spice of life [Remake]
    Chapter:64