Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Sep 30, 2024

    Author's Commentary #213:

    Time to talk about Chapter 213: Bloody tears.
    First off, revisions for Season's 2 and 3 have been completed. There might still be a few minor revisions for the end of Season 3, but all the major ones have been completed. I will also confirm that major revisions are coming for Season 4, along with some more minor ones for Season 5. They won't affect the overall plot too much though.

    As for the chapter, it's finally revealed that the bandaged woman is in fact Tenju Kuroshiro, aka SPCM Himitsutan. Thanks to her winning the game back in Chapter 201, she now possess the same chess prowess as her late twin sister, Taira. This is how she was able to play so well, however it still wasn't enough to beat Daria.

    Speaking of which, I originally had a far more tragic fate in mind for Tenju, but that was back when I was still writing Season 3. I decided she's suffered enough which is why things will finally be looking up for her following this chapter.

    My favorite part about the game though was easily the series of checks given by Tenju at the end. I feel it really helped elevate the story, and bring excellent closure to her character arc. However, if Tenju ends up making the women's national team, then that means she'll get more screen-time. It's not a guarantee given the competitive field, but a strong possibility. What is guaranteed though is that she'll be returning to her SPCM duties, and will be allowed to increase her rating thanks to the WWCF's new policy changes. Perhaps she'll even become a grandmaster.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 30, 2024

    Author's Commentary #85:

    Time to talk about Chapter 85: True beauty.
    If there's one thing this chapter made clear, it's that the main villain of this arc is a truly nefarious woman. Not only did she warp the personalities of the SPCMs, but she also made it so that if they lost a DESPER match, they'd be freed from their brainwashing, but either killed or permanently injured. Unlike in the previous chapter, there is no backstory for either Safumi or Mizuse. For Safumi, I have plans for her and as such, her backstory will gradually be revealed in the story. All I'll say about it is that it is sad.

    As for Mizuse, I didn't really think of much of a backstory for her at the time, however, thanks to the revisions, she has been fleshed out a lot more. In turn, that makes it all the more tragic that such a kindhearted woman will now have her legacy tarnished thanks to the false maestro. And while it may not have been entirely obvious in the chapter, Mizuse is in fact dead, and not merely trapped in a statue. I was originally considering that to be her fate, but in the grander scheme of the story, felt having her actually die made more sense. I will also confirm here that there is a Side Story that divulges Mizuse's full backstory, however, it takes place almost 100 chapters from now after the events of Seasons 4 and 5 along with Side Stories 1 and 2. There is a story reason why it occurs then though.

    As for the game, it was really fun to write. While it is much harder to write 4-player chess games, I definitely wanted to have some in the series. Even after this arc, I feel like there will be more 4-player games in the series.

    However, the next chapter will feature a slight break from the 4-player chess action in order for Mimoko to have a 1v1 match against Doraaki, the one SPCM she has yet to beat. Plus, I also want every SPCM to have at least one 1v1 chess match. If Mimoko beats her, which seems likely, she'll be the one most likely to challenge Ai Kamuro in hopes of saving everyone.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:85

    Sep 30, 2024

    Author's Commentary #84:

    Time to talk about Chapter 84: Tenju and Taira.
    This chapter was brutal. Poor Tenju just ended up suffering and Taira was killed off in brutal fashion. It just goes to show how vile the main villain of this arc truly is.

    As for why Okisato said what he said to Tenju, unlike the other SPCMs, Tenju was not brainwashed. However, instead of seeking better ways to truly try and save Taira and stop the false maestro's plan, she decided to aid her and as a result, became complicit in her scheme. To be fair, Tenju did try to save Taira once, but after having her spirit crushed, resigned herself to aiding the false maestro.

    One thing I was unsure if I nailed when I originally published this chapter, was if I made readers care enough about the SPCMs. At the time, I went back and forth on whether I wanted to have more character moments with the SPCMs before they got brainwashed. I ultimately decided not to, since I felt it would be forced and bloat the story.

    Thanks to the revisions, I feel the SPCMs have been a bit more fleshed out. Doraaki is still a bit on the underdeveloped side, but I feel Mizuse and Tenju have been fleshed out far better than in the original drafts. As for Tenju and Taira's backstory, I was originally going to make it its own chapter, but since the game was so short, I decided to include it in the chapter with the game.

    Speaking of which, the first 4-player chess game has finally graced the story. The game was heavily inspired by a team 4-player chess game between Gothamchess, Eric Rosen, Hikaru Nakamura, and Agadmator. In the game, the team of Gothamchess and Eric Rosen checkmated the team of Hikaru Nakamura and Agadmator in two moves. Since this game is essentially the fool's mate of 4-player chess, I decided that Okisato and Iori would be the ones to play it, and that Tenju would be the most likely to blunder it.

    As for the upcoming 4-player chess games, I will confirm that they are both much longer than the one here and will be far more thrilling than this one.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 30, 2024

    Author's Commentary #71:

    Time to talk about Chapter 71: The bullet demon of Kyoto.
    Originally, this was actually Chapter 70, but ended up getting pushed back a bit due to the revisions. Now as promised, this commentary will focus on Himitsusan, aka Safumi Bouzi, so let's talk about her.

    坊寺 早史 (Bouzi Safumi) is how her name is written in kanji. Her first name, 早史, means "fast" and "chronicle" which is fitting since speed is her game. Her surname, 坊寺, means "monk" and "temple".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is December 27th which she shares with three-time women's world blitz chess champion, Kateryna Lagno.

    Her favorite piece is the queen, due to how much freedom of movement it has.

    Speaking of freedom, Safumi is a strong advocate of everyone having personal freedom to live life as they please. This might seem ironic given her delinquent-like personality, but she truly believes everyone should have the freedom to live their life as they please. I've actually got lots of things planned for her character, but for now, this is all I'll divulge on her.

    As for the game, I had a lot of fun writing and playing it. Funnily enough, the game was played out with normal time control against the Chess.com bot. Since the game was being played at a rapid pace in the story though, there wasn't much bantering between the players compared to other matches, though that didn't stop Safumi from losing her cool.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:71

    Sep 30, 2024

    Author's Commentary #70:

    Time to talk about Chapter 70: Japan's beautiful SPCMs.
    Originally meant to serve as a fanservice special to celebrate the 69th chapter, revisions led to this being both watered down compared to the original, and stuck in the 70th chapter. At lest Chapter 69 had maid Daria though.

    A big reason why I changed the fanservice bit was simply because the original was too long. But if you're a fan of the original, don't worry, it will likely come back in some way, shape, or form as a special chapter. And trust me, it will be worth the wait, both fanservice-wise, and even story-wise as well. Now let's discuss some of the new characters.

    黒代 白羽 (Kuroshiro Tenju) is how Tenju's name is spelled in kanji, while 黒代 黛羅 (Kuroshiro Taira) is how Taira's name is spelled in kanji. 白羽 means "white" and "feather", while 黛羅 means "black veil" and "net". The twin's surname, 黒代, means "black" and "substitute". As you can tell, the twins are based off the theme of black and white. Taira tends to favor the color black, while Tenju the color white. Her hair is naturally black, however she dyed it white.

    Their birthday is January 24th. I chose this day because it was apparently regarded as the most depressing day of the year. The twins have a very harsh backstory. All I'll reveal for now about it is that both were born prematurely and were abandoned by their birth mother. Many believed Taira in particular wouldn't make it, and the twin's mother even requested Taira be euthanized, however, despite being just a premature newborn, Tenju protected her sister as best she could. Luckily, the doctors refused to go along with the twin's mother's request and did all they could to keep the twins alive.

    This incident is what originally led Tenju to develop a sister complex as she felt she was the only one that could stand by Taira's side since everyone else seemed to shun her. As for why Taira was shunned, that will be revealed later in the story.

    Tenju's favorite piece is the rook, mainly because she views them as essential companions to the king, and compares the relationship to her and Taira.

    Taira's favorite piece is also the rook, however, she likes them mainly for the fact that they tend to be an essential piece in the endgame.

    祖堅 道空 (Soken Doraaki) is how Doraaki's name is written in kanji.
    道空 means "road" and "sky" while 祖堅 means "ancestor" and "hard".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me.

    Her birthday is November 4th. I chose the date at random so there's no significance behind it.

    Her favorite piece is the pawn, mainly because she thinks they look cute.

    One final thing I'll touch on is warping. SPCMs and maestros possess the ability to warp to any secret puzzle cafe in the world, WWCF HQ, and their own home. They are unable to warp anyone along with them, unless it is to and from the WWCF HQ. Players are able to unlock a teleportation ability, however, it is very costly. Though in a video game adaptation, you can bet players would instantly have this skip travel ability.

    As for the final SPCM introduced in this chapter, I'll talk about her more in a future commentary.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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