Aug 08, 2021
So, first thing to start with. Typos. There are a ton of them. Proofreading and editing are really needed as it actually makes it a bit hard to read. Also, present tense is a hard way to start a story. If you are just starting out, it's a bit painful to right in. And with how your sentences flow, past tense would serve you better.
Now for the plot. We start off with two guys fighting, a good hook for a story. But one problem that I see is that it lacks a motivation as to why they are fighting. They just fight, so it's rather hard for a reader to grasp why one should care about JDG or MLA (not sure why you name them this, but whatever). They fight, get taken to the principal's office, and... that's it. There's little of why these scene matters, and including some reason, however silly, would engage the reader more.
