Jul 26, 2021
As for the big block of info at the beginning of the chapter, it does feel a little out of place that you chose that moment to do kind of a semi-interlude, as the background isn't tied to anything. It may be fine for webnovel readers who read little segments.
If you do want to integrate it naturally into your story though, you could perhaps weave it into the interactions between Dolly and Runo, while Netty is sleeping. Otherwise, you could make it shorter and more concise to limit the disruption, and transition that block to a conversation that Runo is presumably having with Dolly.
