Jul 06, 2021
I think you conveyed the feeling of loss and the question, "Was it worth it?" quite well here. The heavy emotion and the internal struggles are the highlight here. And I'm wondering what will come out of his struggles in doing the very things that we think are normal, but from his distorted lens.
If I can offer one bit of advice, it's to add more of those disconnects between the real world and what he is used to. You start to do it with the bag of supplies and the lighting, but more of these as he looks upon his old, unfamiliar world would add a bit of flavor to it.