Aug 05, 2021

To:Pearlyn.M

The tub of popcorn is actually full of energy bars. *dun dun dun*

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Aug 05, 2021

To:cielink

Of course. But that would mean for Snazzy to stay with them, rather than heading off INTO THE UNKNOWN!!!!!!!

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Aug 05, 2021

To:Gurg

I tried to keep it short, so it wouldn't fall too far into degeneracy.

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Aug 05, 2021

To:Gurg

Some good action in the next chapter :3

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Aug 04, 2021

I half expected Sinaya to make Joey worship her boob sweat or something. That's also water, right?

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Aug 04, 2021

*eats popcorn*

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Aug 04, 2021

To:Pearlyn.M

Glad you enjoyed it. It's a little respite before the meeting of the second Witch.

Wendy's kinda jealous that she can't make bank on Snazzy fluids.

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Aug 04, 2021

To:Kang

New life. New luck. I guess?

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Aug 04, 2021

To:Kang

It's just a part of his nature and his interests. He doesn't shy away from the ecchi, but he tries to be respectful too. I just hope I balanced it out right.

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Aug 04, 2021

To:Kang

Exactly. Thanks for reading!

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Aug 02, 2021

To:Pearlyn.M

"WHY
DID YOU WRITE THIS. IS THIS WHAT YOU WANT A WINNING ENTRY TO BE? ARE WE REALLY OUT HERE EXPECTING A VISUAL FOR THIS *HEALING* PROCESS"

Yes. ✌️

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Aug 02, 2021

To:JJtheMuse

I actually used Danmachi as the basis for first person when I started writing this (this was my first attempt at writing fiction).
And yes, I kind of wanted to roll with the idea of a strange, questionable stat that people normally didn't care about and see how things would progress. LNs had already focused on other stats like defense for BOFURI, so I picked critical since it's so ambiguious.

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Aug 01, 2021

I feel like I'm slowly losing myself too... in this fog of where the hell are we now? But yes, after coming back to binge, I sudden realized that I'm having issues recalling where each scene takes place... I need a fucking map.

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Aug 01, 2021

I was half expecting Uncle to call themselves "the three fucking amigos".

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Aug 01, 2021

Can I baseball bat Lewis yet?

But yes, as znf pointed out, it felt like Georgie had a little bit too much influence, and it just felt weird to read that part.

Anyways, I dug the impaling :3 Left me with a little more wanting for details on those action parts but that's just me.

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