Sep 05, 2025
This was a great little chapter. You transitioned well. It set up tension with the unknown observer, and the prevalence of self-doubt. Rina is still thinking that everything that Sean’s wrong is because of her, but I think that she is slowly learning that it isn’t. Aki, wants to live up to here father’s name. we learn that even the goddess was not perfect. She left a lot undone. Selene is beginning to think that Rina may actually be the goddess. Thit fits your theme well. For the record, I agree with Selene. It is that the goddess in this world is not necessarily what Rina pictures as a goddess from her world.