Jul 15, 2025
Loving this. I think that Rina is the most self-doubting and negative thinking character you have created so far. I think I love her. I really like the way you wrote her thought process as she assessed her new environment. I know that thinking all too well.
The ending with the fear and what, based on discussions, is a dragon was an intense way to end the chapter. I am looking forward to what happens to our not hero.