Oct 13, 2025
Okay, ouch. š That hit way harder than I was ready for. I thought this was gonna be a cute sunrise date chapter, but no, emotional ambush. The way it slowly shifts from a peaceful moment to a goodbye absolutely wrecked me.
Kaedeās dialogue was beautiful and heartbreaking. The past tense, the smile that didnāt match the mood, the ābefore you wakeā line⦠ugh. And that last kiss before the dream fades? emotional devastation.* š
Also, the way you captured grief and closure here was so gentle but powerful. It wasnāt loud, it was quiet, personal, and deeply human. This is probably one of my favorite chapters so far.
āMoping isnāt your styleā... yeah, Iām crying. š