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Ana Fowl

Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.

You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!

registered at: Jul 27, 2020

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May 09, 2021

To:Kino

Sankyu! Well, they ended up "together" with a promise towards the future. Let's believe it becomes true! And thank you for proofreading, as always!

The Sky Where Seasons Flutter Down

Chapter:1

May 09, 2021

Let's see. The story has promise, that is for sure. However, due to the dialogue being all over the place, it was a tad hard to follow through. I suggest using paragrpah breaks for this, since many of them were just blocks. On the other hand, I can see gramatical errors that have already been pointed out.

All in all, I can see you have lots of ideas and all they need is a bit of organizing and proofreading. You've got this!

Memories of a Flower Child

Chapter:1

May 08, 2021

To:SKRZ-Nao

Yes, they were very introductory to have an initial glimpse of the story and its characters. So far I'm all in for it ^^.

My Sweet Encounter

Chapter:3

May 08, 2021

To:SKRZ-Nao

I'm sure you'll do great!

My Sweet Encounter

Chapter:2

May 08, 2021

To:SKRZ-Nao

Just take it easy and have fun!

My Sweet Encounter

Chapter:1

May 08, 2021

To:Dante

Thank /you/ for reading!

Ideasthesia

Chapter:17

May 08, 2021

To:Dante

Ameka was always planned to be a magical girl from the get-go of the story.

Ideasthesia

Chapter:16

May 08, 2021

To:Dante

I wonder!

Ideasthesia

Chapter:16

May 08, 2021

To:SKRZ-Nao

Ah, thank you so much and welcome aboard! You are really close with one of your two theories there! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story and I manage to deliver ^^!

Ideasthesia

Chapter:1

May 05, 2021

I wonder how the romance will develop in this story due to the tag. Overall, a neat story that looks promising! Looking forward to the upcoming updates!

Hachiko - A Hachishakusama Story

Chapter:1

May 05, 2021

So... is Izumi her step-brother or something? Due to their conversation I had that impression, and would make sense why her mother left her if she was an illegitimate child. Wild theories aside, it's a really nice thing Yuzuki is feeling all warm and fuzzy inside with these relationships forming around her. Hikari is p upbeat, I like her.

My Sweet Encounter

Chapter:3

May 05, 2021

For a second there I thought the romance would become a huge bachelor festival, but so far nothing of the sort has happened which is good! We can see character development without instant "falling in love" scenerios. We can also see the cast interact with each other and growing. What I get so far is that Yuzuki is under an agreement with her father, which has to do with her living a normal life instead of following the footsteps imposed by the Osaka family, hence the difficult condition of hiding her identity, which I'm positive her father is convinced she is doomed to fail. Let's see how this develops.

My Sweet Encounter

Chapter:2

May 05, 2021

I like where this romance story is going. It's simple and fresh in some way. Nothing too complicated, and it's a really nice read to just disconnect from work and life itself. I'm curious about her relationship with her father due to how the events played at the start.

My Sweet Encounter

Chapter:1

May 05, 2021

Aw Kino, thanks for the shoutout!! And even if this is one of your first times writing in third person, I think you did a wonderful job! I could feel the adrenaline during the fight, as well as you mentioning again the story about the gods and vampires. Suzuhara is pretty scary though, she's basically immortal. What I wonder though, or maybe it's just pure coincidence and me making wild theories, Elise's surname is close to Claire's name, especially if you separate the "au" and given I know you know French, made me think crazy theories especially given that the church was to idolize her and so on.

Between Life and Death

Chapter:13

May 02, 2021

To:Pike

Thank you for giving my novel a chance ^^! Well, yes the pentagram is pretty particular, so just calling it 'strange' wouldn't have made it justice for when it referenced in the future once again.

Hope you keep on reading, I know my novel isn't everyone's cup of tea ^^!

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Chapter:0

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