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Ana Fowl

Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.

You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!

registered at: Jul 27, 2020

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Jul 05, 2021

Hello! Please fix your Author's note, you have not specified a Prompt nor clarified the Themes and the My Themes section. And please, PLEASE remove your cover image. It is a fanart of Ichimatsu and that enters the area of copyrighted images since it's artwork (in this case fanart) that does not belong to you. This is an immediate disqualification if not removed soon. Thank you.

Sun Buster:The Under king

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

Well, this was definitely an Experience(tm). As always with your classic sense of humour and wackiness. Good luck with the contest!

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

A Historical approach, I'm digging this! Good luck with the contest!

Unseen

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

As a mahou shoujo writer I'm very excited about this premise! One little thing though, please specify your Themes and My Themes in the Author's note section, if not the story might get disqualified. Good luck with the contest!

Happy Sweet Magical Girl Life

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

This was really, really good!! I was sucked in as if I were watching a painting in a gallery, really gets the point across! Good luck with the contest!

The Gallery

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

Good start! Just one little thing, you are mix and matching prompts in the "My Themes" section. School belongs to Prompt #5, and you are using Prompt #1. Please change it for a synonym or a similar word. Good luck with the contest!

My Life as A background Character in a Shojo Drama..

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

The dialogues were a bit all over the place but it's a solid start. Quite a unique idea!

Living My New Café Life With My PTRD-41

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

If you are submitting this for the contest, which I guess you are since you ticked the box, please put the Prompt you used, the Themes and My Themes in the author's note section. If not, the story will be taken out of this section and/or disqualified. Thank you!

Shūten

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

Nice to see more works with Prompt #3. One little thing though, dialogues in English usually go with ". If you are aiming to use a more rather Spanish Literature approach, it's using this "—" and not "-". Good luck with the contest!

Cursed

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

Hm, I have some feedback if you don't mind ;; Dialogues should use " if you are writing in English. Your paragraphs are big as well, so I'd suggest to break them up into deparate parts, as well as separating it from the dialogues. Another quick thing, you are using a theme from prompt #1, which is "Drama". You cannot mix and match, please use a synonym!

Birds Were Supposed to Sing That Day as Well.

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

Quite a shocking first chapter, really good! One thing though, your Themes section is mix and matching, and that's a huge no-no according to the rules. You are using "Drama" which is from prompt #1 and "Suspense" that belong to Prompt #3, and you are using Prompt #2. Also, you are missing your "My Themes" as well. You could add those there as synonyms. Good luck with the contest!

Reborn... as a God of Rebirth?

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

Really nice beginning! Just one small thing, you are using as a My Theme, a Theme from another prompt, which is "Drama" and belongs to Prompt #1. Please change it for a synonym or another word. Good luck with the contest!

Max Caliber

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

This first chapter was really good! Just one little thing, Romance is not in the prompt list for "Impossible Romance", please remove it and add it to the My Themes section!

Jade Heart

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

Nice and intriguing beginning! Good luck with the contest!

Online Love

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

Again, really nice writing style! Leaves a cliffhanger that makes you crave for more, so gotta wait for next Monday! Good luck with the contest!

Serving the Dark Lord? I Didn’t Sign up for This!

Chapter:1

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