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Ana Fowl

Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.

You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!

registered at: Jul 27, 2020

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Jul 05, 2021

Nice! Just one small thing, you are not using any of the prompts given, so please check that since it can get disqualified. Also, you are using as Theme, Themes that are not from your possible prompt, such as "Shounen". That should be a "My Theme". Another thing, the theme, which is "Fantasy" belongs to Prompt #2. Please change it for a synonym or another word.

GOD'S BOOK

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

Great start! Just one small thing, you are using as a My Theme, a Theme from another prompt, which is "Supernatural" and belongs to Prompt #3. Please change it for a synonym or another word. Good luck with the contest!

I was once a chef, but due to the circumstances, I am left with no choice but to be a Fighter

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

Short and concise! Just one small thing, you are using as a My Theme, a Theme from another prompt, which is "Comedy" and belongs to Prompt #1 as well as "Fantasy" that belongs to Prompt #2. Please change it for a synonym or another word. Good luck with the contest!

Last’s Detective Agency

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

Hello, the story looks good so far! Just a little reminder, dialogues should be their own independent sentence and not mashed together in a paragraph!

Summoning Trebuchets To Survive A World At War!

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

Hello! You cannot mix and match Themes from other prompts! Please remove "Comedy" since it belongs to Prompt #1, change it for a synonym please! In regards to the story, it seems promising! Good luck with the contest!

Balancing the Scales: The Sage Hero's Story

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

Well, this was definitely an Experience(tm). As always with your classic sense of humour and wackiness. Good luck with the contest!

Why Kill? When Witches Can Be Tentacled!

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

A Historical approach, I'm digging this! Good luck with the contest!

Unseen

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

This was really, really good!! I was sucked in as if I were watching a painting in a gallery, really gets the point across! Good luck with the contest!

The Gallery

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

Good start! Just one little thing, you are mix and matching prompts in the "My Themes" section. School belongs to Prompt #5, and you are using Prompt #1. Please change it for a synonym or a similar word. Good luck with the contest!

My Life as A background Character in a Shojo Drama..

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

The dialogues were a bit all over the place but it's a solid start. Quite a unique idea!

Living My New Café Life With My PTRD-41

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

If you are submitting this for the contest, which I guess you are since you ticked the box, please put the Prompt you used, the Themes and My Themes in the author's note section. If not, the story will be taken out of this section and/or disqualified. Thank you!

Shūten

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

Nice to see more works with Prompt #3. One little thing though, dialogues in English usually go with ". If you are aiming to use a more rather Spanish Literature approach, it's using this "—" and not "-". Good luck with the contest!

Cursed

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

Hm, I have some feedback if you don't mind ;; Dialogues should use " if you are writing in English. Your paragraphs are big as well, so I'd suggest to break them up into deparate parts, as well as separating it from the dialogues. Another quick thing, you are using a theme from prompt #1, which is "Drama". You cannot mix and match, please use a synonym!

Birds Were Supposed to Sing That Day as Well.

Chapter:0

Jul 05, 2021

Quite a shocking first chapter, really good! One thing though, your Themes section is mix and matching, and that's a huge no-no according to the rules. You are using "Drama" which is from prompt #1 and "Suspense" that belong to Prompt #3, and you are using Prompt #2. Also, you are missing your "My Themes" as well. You could add those there as synonyms. Good luck with the contest!

Reborn... as a God of Rebirth?

Chapter:1

Jul 05, 2021

Really nice beginning! Just one small thing, you are using as a My Theme, a Theme from another prompt, which is "Drama" and belongs to Prompt #1. Please change it for a synonym or another word. Good luck with the contest!

Max Caliber

Chapter:1

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