Oct 12, 2024
Ngl, with every chapter seems to be reestablishing the status quo before breaking it again, the story doesn't feel like it's progressing towards something, but rather just presenting different drafts of the same event. Sure, I can see that there is some modicum of advancement, but that's not the impression I get. I feel like you can definitely afford to have a string of 'shit hits the fan chapters' without having to prepend the action with something calm. Let the storm rage.
