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Oct 24, 2025

Fellow Brit spotted (I had actually figured that out ages ago)

The Empath's Curse

Chapter:18

Oct 23, 2025

One thing I'd like to note here is that whilst I appreciate how beautifully written your prose is, I feel like the hook isn't strong enough. We have met far too many characters in far too small a span for any of them to leave any impression on me. Even with my notes, I often fail to realise what vibe the interaction between some of the more 'minor' characters should have because they're just so dang many. I feel like you could've culled some of these or staggered them out, rather than frontload them all in the first act. I get that you need to announce your actors before you give them meaning, but given how compact your scenes are, it feels like none of them have any room to breathe.

Furthermore, I'm a little put off by the mystery here. We're roughly a quarter of the length in, and I feel like I've not been even hinted at any stakes here - or the little hinting that has been done (the inquisitors, of instance) has not lent any weight to any of the events. And despite the causal link between any two scenes catching my interest at first, I can't help feeling like there's an aimlessness to this whole thing. It feels almost like slice of life with a nice little twist.

The Empath's Curse

Chapter:9

Oct 23, 2025

womenwomenwomenwomenwomenwomenwomenwomenwomenwomen

Love the women in this story. They're all very cool

The Empath's Curse

Chapter:5

Oct 23, 2025

This is peak yuri at its finest. If these girls don't confess using an elaborate fighting scene, I will be upset.

The Empath's Curse

Chapter:3

Oct 14, 2025

This is a shitpost and a half, but the worst part is that I can definitely imagine Gemini roleplaying this

My Tragic Deaths: Miserable Mina

Chapter:1

Oct 14, 2025

Self-insert go brr...

This is very cute :D Love Minya cat attention span, love Hiro's equally absent absentmindedness, and love the little characters populating your story's tiny village. :3

Kitty Section

Chapter:1

Oct 06, 2025

Not this story about a barrister becoming soft capitalist/libertarian propaganda

The Barrister From Beyond

Chapter:3

Oct 04, 2025

To:Lucy

Thank you, my dear. I'm proud that you managed to finish your story and happy all the same. Looking forward to reading it in full :)

A True Hero's form

Chapter:3

Oct 02, 2025

I mean he can still dream about foxgirls... He's Japanese, that's probably in the top 5 most common fetishes

Weaver: Fragments of a Promise

Chapter:2

Oct 02, 2025

Bruh, this guy goes through his entire arc in the span of one chapter 😭😭😭😭

Weaver: Fragments of a Promise

Chapter:1

Oct 01, 2025

Astonishing!

He was ready to die but he woke up young again in a fantasy world.

Chapter:0

Sep 30, 2025

This is so LNy I'm now attracted to my sister

>FORBIDDIC< I Got Reincarnated Into A World Where I Was Forbidden From Learning About Magic But I Will Persist

Chapter:4

Sep 26, 2025

Gay gay

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:29

Sep 25, 2025

Why are these two getting along so well, grrrr, I was always told siblings hate each other, grrrr

Descent into the Inkyard

Chapter:1

Sep 21, 2025

Couple of things:
First up, missed another line to translate. Something hit Ryo's bum and then he flew downstairs. Banger line
Second up, you sometimes change pronouns mid-sentence for a character and it's kind of distracting.
Third up, this was a pretty nice chapter. The orphan as a hero was reasonably used in mid 00s anime before it sort of got relegated to niche shounen. Nevertheless, I like the complexes Ryo has and the (albeit a little weird) way he describes his siblings as being literal copies of their mum. Plus his desire of waiting for his parents to come rescue him is pretty cute. Pat pat.

The Legacy – The heirs of a lost world

Chapter:2

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